School I have a critic about the current education system, don´t you think that kids shouldn´t spend almost all their childhood sitting at a desk at school? it´s like they were preparing them to be of

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School I have a critic about the current education system, don´t you think that kids shouldn´t spend almost all their childhood sitting at a desk at school? it´s like they were preparing them to be office workers. Kids must obey everything, be quiet or they qualify them like trouble makers, that it´s like being in the army. Kids should be more free, play with other kids, that way they learn, how they discover, they should have more fun learning. Teachers should guide them, teach them how to be good people, make them plays where they can learn the basic maths, read, science, etc. but not in the way they do today. Kids are getting bored today and it´s not their fault.

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I have a critic (I would use "criticism" here) about the current education system, (user period to end sentence and capitalize the ''D") don´t** you think that kids shouldn´t (This is a double negative with shouldn't. Remove the 'not' in Don't**) spend almost all their childhood sitting at a desk at school? (Capitalize ''I'') it´s like they were (this should be either "we are" or "we're" instead of were) preparing them to be office workers. Kids must obey everything, be quiet or they qualify them like trouble makers, that it´s like being in the army.
Kids should be more free, play with other kids, that way they learn, how they discover, they should have more fun learning. (The previous sentence is a run on sentence. You should make it into two different sentences.) Teachers should guide them, teach them how to be good people, make them plays where they can learn the basic (I think you need ''of'' here) maths, read (reading), science, etc. (Need a capital ''B'') but not in the way they do today. Kids are getting bored today and it´s not their fault.

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I have a criticism about the current education system. Do you think that kids shouldn´t spend almost all their childhood sitting at a desk at school? It´s like they we are preparing them to be office workers. Kids must obey everything, be quiet or they qualify them like trouble makers. It´s like being in the army.

Kids should be more free and play with other kids. That is the way they learn, how they discover, they should have more fun learning. Teachers should guide them, teach them how to be good people, make them plays where they can learn the basic of maths, reading, science, etc. But not in the way they do today. Kids are getting bored today and it´s not their fault.

I agree that our society is very technical, but I think education should be more relax and easier al least in elementary school, it should be more focus on the person, their values, moral, how to think,a time of discovery, etc. but starting in high school they should start with more technical education and then continue with technical in college.

This is a very interesting point. I think that there should be some alternate means of educating them besides sitting them in a chair all day and preparing them for the sedentary lives most of them are destined to lead. I do think, however, that there needs to at least be some established baseline of education everyone should receive. Education is very important for the success of future generations, especially in our highly technical societies.

I am a kid and I kinda agree

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