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Today Good morning!! How are you today? I'm not very well, because I quarreled with my aunt. I don't explain the details of the fact but she doesn't understand that I have a brain, I have ideas and I'm able to look after myself!! Why is she so egoist? Why doesn't she ask me what I think? Why does she want to decide for me? I don't understand and now I'm angry for ask her these questions! Oh, I think to that phrase "More relations are tight, more they do hurt!!".. Or "you can't choose your family", this is true!! Other this fact.. Mmmh, today in my country it's foggy, so I can't use my car and go away from home.. Probably I'll study English, I'll read HP and I'll to tidy up my room because I'm very untidy (a person said that this is sign of creativity, but it isn't my case!). I wish you a great day, bye bye! Silvia

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Good morning!! How are you today? I'm not very well, because I quarrelled with my aunt. I won't explain the details of the fact but she doesn't understand that I have a brain, I have ideas and I'm able to look after myself!!

 

Why is she so egoist? Why doesn't she ask me what I think? Why does she want to decide for me? I don't understand and now I'm angry for asking her these questions! Oh, I think of that phrase "The more relations are tight, more they do hurt!!".. Or "you can't choose your family", this is true!!
Other than this fact.. Mmmh, today in my country it's foggy, so I can't use my car and go away from home.. Probably I'll study English, I'll read HP and I'll tidy up my room because I'm very untidy (a person said that this is sign of creativity, but it isn't my case!). I wish you a great day, bye bye!
Silvia

 

Hello Silvia,

I think all most older people are full of advice and some of it is good but some of it is not relevant in today's society! I remember my uncle telling me I was crazy to give up a job in a bank to become a teacher. I had to explain that when I started work I would have agreed with him but things had changed so much over 20 years that it was no longer true.

 

Please forgive your aunt, she only want the best for you in her eyes.

 

Just a few small improvements to your text.

 

All the best

 

Bob

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