My favorite animal
My favorite animal is the dog, because is very loyal. I like the cats but I feel the dogs are most friendly. The people like the cats beacuse it is independents, and wash itselves.
When I was 7 years old, my father brought me a dog, It name was salvador. But, why this name ? The story tell us when the mother of salvador give birth my dog it was very sick, and the veterian thought that salvador will die.
But fortunately 3 months later it was better. And the veterian called him salvador.
Then when I was 14 years old, I was in the school, and at nine o´clock my father went there and looked for me, later he told me that we should came back home, when we arrive then I see my dog died on the floor, it had a heart attack.
Yes I cried so much, but now I have 23 I think that all have deadline.
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My favorite animal
My favorite animal is the dog, because it's very loyal. I like the cats but I feel the dogs are more friendly. The people like the cats because they are independent and wash themselves.
When I was 7 years old, my father brought me a dog, Its name was Salvador. But, why this name? We heard when Salvador's mother give birth my dog it was very sick, and the veterinarian thought that Salvador would die.
But fortunately 3 months later he was better. And the veterinarian called him Salvador.
Then when I was 14 years old, I was in the school, and at nine o´clock my father went there and looked for me, later he told me that we should go back home, when we arrived then I saw that my dog died on the floor, it had a heart attack.
Yes I cried so much, but now that I am 23 I think that everyone has a time to die.
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Thank you Amanda.
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"because they are very loyal" is also acceptable.
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