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New year Happy new year:) yesterday I went to Chiba to see the first sunrise of a new year:) that was so beautiful. Last year I couldn't see the sunrise so I'm happy to see it. And I ate rice cake with red bean jam. It was fresh one so delicious. I enjoyed spending in Chiba.

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New year

Happy new year:) Yesterday I went to Chiba to see the first sunrise of a the new year:) that It was so beautiful. Last year I couldn't see the sunrise so I'm I was happy to see it. And I also ate rice cake with red bean jam. It was fresh one so it was delicious*. I enjoyed spending in Chiba*.

 

Good job!


The sentence "It was fresh so it was delicious" isn't wrong, but "It was delicious because it was fresh" sounds more natural to me.


If you say "I enjoyed spending in Chiba", people will probably think that you mean you enjoyed spending money in Chiba. If you enjoyed the time that you had in Chiba, then "I enjoyed spending time in Chiba" would be a better sentence.

 

あけおめ!Happy New Year's :)

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