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Where is True Friendship? Well, I guess a true friendship is one of the most desired things in life. Despite of sharing dreams be something that makes people happier and more confident, it can be harmful to them if it's not shared with the right person. I think that first we should make up our minds whether a person is worthy to count on, only then we would open up our mouths and,of course, our hearts. Moreover, with relationships becoming each day more digital, people are getting apart from each other, even those who live in the same house. I'm talking about parents and sons that are separated by technology (cellphones, notebooks,ipads, etc) and because of that, they can't have daily face to face conversations. All this ends up in People who seem to be getting colder to each other. I hope people rediscover the power of gathering the whole family on a sofa at the end of a busy day, and then share a little about their rotines ; In this point, i miss grandma days! Bring Forth True relationships!

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Where is True Friendship?

Well, I guess a true friendship is one of the most desired things in life. Despite of the fact that sharing dreams be->is something that makes people happier and more confident, it can be harmful to them if it's not shared with the right person. I think that first, we should make up our minds whether a person is worthy to count on or not, only then we would open up our mouths and,of course, our hearts->be more open to them. Moreover, with relationships becoming each day more digital->gradually distant due to technology , people are getting apart from each other, even those who live in the same house. I'm talking about parents and sons->their childs (childs is better as it includes sons and daughters) that are separated by technology (cellphones, notebooks,ipads, etc) and because of that, they can't have daily face to face conversations. All this ends up in People who seem to be getting colder to each other. -> Consequently, people end up getting colder to each other.
I hope people rediscover the power of the moments when the whole family gathers on a sofa at the end of a busy day, and then share a little about their routines. In this point, I miss my grandma's days!
Bring Forth->back True relationships! (Bring forth doesn't sound right here as it means give birth to sb or produce sth)

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