Happy New Year

Time flys so quickly. 2015 just past, remained so many memories, I took part in IEITS exam, tried to do a dictation of one short BBC news article every day in order to improve my listening skills, got a part time job in a cafe for the first time in my life and even had a serious arguement with two girls:(

Whatever I have experiencd, I learned from it. As for 2016, I hope I can be more brave, more confident, full of energetic energy, enthusiasm and curiosity to chase after my goals. And I must try harder to appreciate and show my love to people around me.

2016, I want to meet a better world and a better me as well.

Great writing Lyn, most of your writing is pretty good. I have just added a few things to make it sound more natural. 2 points; I was not sure what you meant by "remained so many memories". You could say '2015 just past, leaving so many memories...' or 'I have so many memories of 2015..'. Secondly, we don't usually leave out the 'I' "took part in IELTS exam" in formal writing or if you haven't alread mentioned 'I'.

I am glad you can look back on 2015 and see the benefits. All the best for 2016! Hope this helps 

Time flies so quickly. 2015 just passed

Good work. Your writing is getting better!

Happy New Year