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In my heart, my roommates are excellent (OR: "great", "fantastic", "wonderful"). They are very economical. They always consider others. I asked whether we should buy a washing machine. They wanted to save some money so they gave up (OR: "turned down") the idea. Why do they want to save money? Because they want to buy soft pyjamas for their parents before the Winter Solstice. Their decisions affected me and I joined in thiseir plan as well. We did got some part-time jobs. Eventually, we made their wish came true. How happy we were! What a warm pyjamas! I still remember when we celebrated Bambi's birthday. Bambi is one of my roommates. She was nearly moved to tears when she opened the door and saw a lot (OR: "a bunch of") of candles put arranged into a the shape of her name. She said, "It's I'm my so lucky to be with you." Happiness is likes the air. You can‘t catch sight of and or touch it (OR: "You can't see or touch it."). Happiness to our hearts is what food is to our stomach. However, In this fast-paced life, do you lose sight of the happiness around you?
Today is the last day of 2015. Give a hug to those who accompany you spentding the entire year of 2015 with you. I wishing that happiness will always be with you in the next year!
Touch the happiness (I'm not sure what this means)
Now that it's Towards almost the end of the semester, I have mixed feelings when I look back on the past. Time passed so quickly as if that yesterday felt like I had the first time I had ever stepped into college for the first time yesterday. I gained learned a lot during this first semester. I met a number of unique people in different character. Some people are just are passersby (OR: "acquaintances"/"strangers"). But there are three people who stepping walked into my heart---my dear roommates. We have sometimes trouble fight with each other, but it quickly it transforms into food for friendship growth a bonding experience. It makes our hearts come move closer. We become a little more tolerant due to because we care.
Touch the happiness
Towards the end of the semester,I have mixed feelings when I look back to the past.Time passed quickly as if I had stept into college for the first time yesterday.I gained a lot during the first semester.I met a number of people with different personalities. Some people just are passerbys. But there are three people stepping into my heart---my dear roommates.We have some trouble with each other, but quickly it transforms into food for friendship growth. It makes our hearts come closer.A little more tolerance due to care.
In my heart,my roommates are excellent.They are very economical.They always consider others。I asked whether we should buy a washing machine.They wanted to save some money so they gave up the idea.Why do they want to save money?Because they want to buy soft pajamas for their parents before The Winter Solstice.They infected me and I joined into their plan as well.We did some part-time jobs.Eventually,we made their wish come true.How happy we were!What warm pajamas! I still remember when we celebrited Bambi's birthday.Bambi is one of my roommates.She was nearly moved to tears when she opened the door and saw a lot of candles put into the shape of her name.She said:"I'm so lucky to be with you." Happiness likes the air.You can‘t catch sight of and touch it.Happiness to our hearts is what food is to our stomach.However,in this fast-paced life,do you lose sight of the happiness around you?
Today is the last day of 2015.GIve a hug to those who accompany you spending the entire year of 2015.Wishing the happiness will always be with you in next year!
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