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Goodbye an old year I stand here today waiting for a new year that it’s almost here already. Only last one day to say it good bay at this 2015. So to begin celebrate a hopeful new year. First I thank LORD God for everything he done in my life, as well as the generosity, mercy and his big love with us that he has shown throughout a long this year and it will be forever like that. I wish a lot peace and prosperity for all people around the world so that I want God bless you and gives you a lot humble, patient by the task before us at these moments where there’s such a violence anywhere. That Orient countries are in the midst of crisis is now well understood. There’re nations are at war against a wild terrorism where is not acceptable that horrible way to combat and to kill innocent people. We need to do a pray our Lord God and ask him peace for that combat zone and those crimes and injustices stop it. Also we know the global economy is not was the best on this 2015. For example in my country our economy it was bad for a consequence of greed and irresponsibility on the part of some political collective failure to make good choices and prepare my nation for a new age. Families have been lost opportunities to keep walking forward and get out of the poverty; jobs shed; businesses shattered. Our health system it was a little worse in cooperation to the other one year 2014.We had more violence and murders and in our streets. But we not have only bad stuff on this year that is almost finishing, No. not all. We have been so much good news too. For example a very important change in our education system as was it the privet catholic schools where all our children will can to going to takes classes without pay anything, totally free. Transport area is building other one important metro length on the subway that it will be across to the city. Personally way I bought a new Isuzu D-max truck and on this next New Year I got a plane. It about to make a journey to New York, I want to visit that city and the big apple that never sleep. I could like to eat a hotdog and can to visit a couple friends their living in Union City. I don’t know very well yet. I wish to arrive there at summer. God bless you and happy New Year for everyone. I hope the vast majority of people could understand that I trying to tell you in this note and remove all my errors on this article.

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Goodbye to old year

"Goodbye to another year" or "Goodbye to an old year" (although this sentence does not make much sense in English).

 

I stand here today waiting for a new year that it's   is almost here already.

 

Only last one day to say it good bay at this 2015.

"There is only only more day to say goodbye to 2015."

 

So I to  begin to celebrate a hopeful new year.

First I thank LORD God for everything he has done in my life, as well as the generosity, mercy and his big love with us that he has shown throughout a long this year and it will be forever like that.

I would say either "I thank the Lord", or " I thank God"...for everything he has done in my life, as well as the generosity, mercy, and great love he has shown us throughout this long year; and it will forever be so.

(The last part is a little tricky and involves complex grammar. But if you have two separate thoughts that could be one sentence, you use a semicolon. However, you're starting the sentence by thanking God, so I'm not sure there's a 100% correct way to combine both statements.I just reworded it to make it sound more natural).

 



I wish for a lot of peace and prosperity for all people around the world.

 I want God to bless you all, and to help everyone be humble and patient, especially during moments of such violence everywhere. That countries in the Orient are in the midst of crises is now well understood. Nations are at war against extreme terrorism.  We need to pray to our Lord God and ask him for peace in those combat zones.
Also, we know the global econonmy was not the best in 2015. For example, in my country our economy was bad due to greed and irresponsibility on the part of the political collective. Politicians failed to make good choices and prepare my nation for a new age.

Families have lost opportunities to keep moving forward and to get out of poverty. Jobs were lost, businesses were shattered.

 

Our health system was worse than it was in 2014.

We had more violence and murders in our streets.

 

But we have had not only bad things happen during this soon-to-be-over year. No, not at all. There has been so much good news as well.

For example, a very important change in our education system was that private Catholic schools, where all our children attend, will be totally free.

 

An important metro extension is being built in the subway. I bought an Isuzu D-max truck....

and this next New Year I got a plane. (Not sure what you meant here)It about to make a journey to New York,

 

I want to visit New York (the Big Apple that never sleeps!). I would like to eat a hotdog and visit a couple friends who live in Union City. I don’t know when I'll go. I wish to arrive there this summer.

God bless you and happy New Year to everyone.


I hope the vast majority of people could understand what I'm trying to tell you in this note, and remove all my errors.

 

 

Great job Victor! Your English is a lot better than my Spanish.

 

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Goodbye an old year

I stand here today waiting for a new year that it’s almost here already. Only last one day to say it good bay at this 2015. So to begin celebrate a hopeful new year. First I thank LORD God for everything he done in my life, as well as the generosity, mercy and his big love with us that he has shown throughout a long this year and it will be forever like that.

I wish a lot peace and prosperity for all people around the world so that I want God bless you and gives you a lot humble, patient by the task before us at these moments where there’s such a violence anywhere. That Orient countries are in the midst of crisis is now well understood. There’re nations are at war against a wild terrorism where is not acceptable that horrible way to combat and to kill innocent people. We need to do a pray our Lord God and ask him peace for that combat zone and those crimes and injustices stop it.
Also we know the global economy is not was the best on this 2015. For example in my country our economy it was bad for a consequence of greed and irresponsibility on the part of some political collective failure to make good choices and prepare my nation for a new age.

Families have been lost opportunities to keep walking forward and get out of the poverty; jobs shed; businesses shattered. Our health system it was a little worse in cooperation to the other one year 2014.We had more violence and murders and in our streets. But we not have only bad stuff on this year that is almost finishing, No. not all. We have been so much good news too. For example a very important change in our education system as was it the privet catholic schools where all our children will can to going to takes classes without pay anything, totally free.

Transport area is building other one important metro length on the subway that it will be across to the city. Personally way I bought a new Isuzu D-max truck and on this next New Year I got a plane. It about to make a journey to New York, I want to visit that city and the big apple that never sleep. I could like to eat a hotdog and can to visit a couple friends their living in Union City. I don’t know very well yet. I wish to arrive there at summer.

God bless you and happy New Year for everyone.
I hope the vast majority of people could understand that I trying to tell you in this note and remove all my errors on this article.

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