Television Will Affect Children's Creativity or Not
Nowadays,television is becoming more cheaper and more popular.Almost each horse has a television.Some people insist that television is not good for children's creativity instead of restrictinh it.Others believe that television is very usefull for boardenning children's eye.They can know everything happened in different parts of the world without going out.But I do not see eye to eye with them and I insist that there are less active effects than negative effects of television to creativity.
The following reasons can supporte my point of view.To start with,most of us watch dtelevision just in order to kill time rather than to get something new or something usefull.The attitude decides that our creativity will not be improved.In addition,we always hear our frineds complain that the television is no more attraction than novel.What they put on television is so different with their imagination.Television sometimes is directed by directors.It just show something from their point of vies.while we should make it clear that there are several possibilities .Finally,television is often treated as a compain,especially when one is alone,At this moment,television is only use to drive away the sense of lonly.
To sum up,television is definitely affect children's creativity.
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Does Television Affect Children's Creativity or Not?
These days, televisions are becomingThe following reasons
Finally, television is often treated as a kind of company, especially when one is alone. In these moments, television is only used to drive away a feeling of loneliness.
To sum up, television
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