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Television Will Affect Children's Creativity or Not Nowadays,television is becoming more cheaper and more popular.Almost each horse has a television.Some people insist that television is not good for children's creativity instead of restrictinh it.Others believe that television is very usefull for boardenning children's eye.They can know everything happened in different parts of the world without going out.But I do not see eye to eye with them and I insist that there are less active effects than negative effects of television to creativity. The following reasons can supporte my point of view.To start with,most of us watch dtelevision just in order to kill time rather than to get something new or something usefull.The attitude decides that our creativity will not be improved.In addition,we always hear our frineds complain that the television is no more attraction than novel.What they put on television is so different with their imagination.Television sometimes is directed by directors.It just show something from their point of vies.while we should make it clear that there are several possibilities .Finally,television is often treated as a compain,especially when one is alone,At this moment,television is only use to drive away the sense of lonly. To sum up,television is definitely affect children's creativity.

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Does Television Affect Children's Creativity or Not?

These days, televisions are becoming more cheaper and more popular. Almost every house has a television. Some people insist that television is not good for children's creativity; instead, television of restricts it. Others believe that television is very usefull for broadening a child's perspective. They can know about things which happened in different parts of the world without leaving their house. However, I do not see eye to eye with these people and I insist that there are fewer positive effects than negative effects of television on creativity.

The following reasons can supporte my point of view. To start with, most of us watch dtelevision only in order to kill time rather than to acquire something new or something usefull.This attitude already decides that our creativity will not be improved. In addition, we often hear our frineds complain that the television has no further attraction than a novelty. What is put on television is very different from their imagination. What goes on television is often chosen by directors. It simply shows something from their own point of view, whereas it should be made it clear that there are several possibilities.

Finally, television is often treated as a kind of company, especially when one is alone. In these moments, television is only used to drive away a feeling of loneliness.

To sum up, television is definitely affects children's creativity in a negative fashion.

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