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What makes us feel gratifying gratified is that everything has been is now in the past. Last summer vacation, we held a party to welcome her home, a real home-coming party consisting of our classmates. And now she often chats with me on WeChat. So I don't feel she is far away from me anymore, wherever she is.
Nothing beats the good times that you and your friends have shared. Most importantly, I don't wanna want anyone to disappears in from my life once we became friends.
Company always, love always. (陪伴是最长情的告白)
Thank you for reading my story. It would be kind of you to correct me.
Sorry, I had to post the correction in 2 parts.
What a lovely story about your friend Ran. She sounds very special.
Remember in English to always place a "space" after a punctuation mark.
Also, when writing, don't write "wanna". This is only used in spoken English. When writing, always use "want to".
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Company always,love always
Today, one of my best friends asked me for my address, and because she wanted to send me a GRE words book so that we could recite words together.She Her name is Ran and she is the my classmates who touched me most in high school. She was the flag bearer during the week of military training. Unfortunately, she suffered from a severe ultroviolet allergy and sunburn, but she got through it for the honour of our class. From then on I remembered her as the tough-minded girl.
And then Her seat was near mine, so we got familiar soon to know each other quickly. She earned the nickname "Second Sister" because she is very funny, cute and tall. There are many funny things between us and other our classmates. Once when I turned around and to talk to her, I upsetted an inkstand and ruined the coat of another friend. However, he didn't see it. That's why Ran and I erased the stains using a "magic pen" and we were suppressing our smiles in all afternoon.
We had a happy time in the first two years in high school. But then a bad girl quarreled with her and most of our classmates isolated the bad girl, which made our class teacher very angry. The teacher gave a painful lesson to those who isolated the bad girl. Ran felt so sorry to for us that she transferred to an international school in Beijing. After several months she went to America.
There was very little contact between she her and her friends because she was not okay in the first year. She found her boyfriend in America had a tendency of domestic violence. She said she missed us more when she contacted us.
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