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Job satisfaction Our jobs have an important role in our lives. We make money because of our jobs. Some may think the most important aspect of a job is money; others disagree. I think the money is important, however, I don't think it is the most important aspect of our jobs. Job satisfaction is more important than the money. We spend a considerable amount of time on our jobs, so we should be interested in our jobs. Even if our jobs make us able to earn a huge amount of money, it won't suit us when we are not interested in it. For example, several months ago I visited a doctor because one of my teeth was painful. The dentist was working on my tooth and also talking with me. I think he said that he did not feel satisfied with his job. He was saying that he had to do the same all days. He thought that the job was boring, because not only he had to visit many people who are sick, but also he had to do the same for all of them. I was wondering whether the money he made via his was worth it. So, when his work on my tooth was done, I asked him about the money he mad. He calculated all the money he needed to have a comfortable life. He made a huge amount of money. His costs compare to his income was nothing. The only thing he did with the money he made was saving it in a bank. He inferred that if he did something that he liked to do, he could make enough money and also could be happier.

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Job satisfaction

Our jobs have an important role in our lives. We make money because of our jobs. Some may think the most important aspect of a job is money; others disagree. I think that money is important, however, I don't think it is the most important aspect of our jobs.

Job satisfaction is more important than the money. We spend a considerable amount of time on our jobs, so we should be interested in the work that we do. Even if we are able to earn a huge amount of money, it won't suit us if we are not interested in it. For example, several months ago I visited a doctor because one of my teeth was hurting. The dentist was working on my tooth and also talking with me. I think he said that he did not feel satisfied with his job. He was saying that he had to do the same thing every day. He thought that the job was boring, because not only does he have to see many people who are sick, but also he has to do the same thing for all of them. I was wondering whether the money he earns was worth it. So, when his work on my tooth was done, I asked him about the money he makes. He calculated all the money he needed to have a comfortable life. He made a lot of money. His costs compared to his income was nothing. The only thing he did with the money he made was put it in a savings account at a  bank. He inferred that if he did something that he liked to do, he could make enough money and also could be happier.
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Job Satisfaction

Our jobs have an important role in our lives. We make money because of our jobs. S  and some may think the most important aspect of a job is money; others disagree. I think the money is important, however, I don't think it is the most important aspect of our jobs.

Job satisfaction is more important than the money. We spend a considerable amount of time on our jobs, so we should be interested in our jobs work. Even if our jobs make us we are able to earn a huge amounts of money, it won't suit us when if we are not interested in it the work. For example, several months ago I visited a doctor because one of my teeth was painful hurting. The dentist was working on my tooth and also talking with to me. ((The dentist was talking to me while he was working on my teeth.)) I think He said that he did not feel satisfied with his job. He was saying also said that he had to do the same all days thing every day. He thought that the his job was boring, because not only he had to did he visit many people who are sick, but also he he also had to do the same for thing for all of them. I was wondering whether the money he made via his was worth it. So, when his work on my tooth was done ((when he finished with my tooth)), I asked him about the money he made. He calculated all the money he needed would need to have a comfortable life. He made a huge ((large)) amount of money. His costs compared to his income was nothing. The only thing he did with the money he made was saving put it in a bank ((put it in a savings account)). He inferred ((concluded)) that if he did was doing something that he liked to do, he could make enough money and also could be happier.

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