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Character. Our character is the great part of our life. Our society involve different people with different characters. I think, that it make our life more interesting. Meetings with various people make our life brighter, allow to see the world from different points of view. There are no ideal people in the world. However, some people have such traits that, undoubtedly, attract. We strive to communicate with lavish, friendly, honesty people. We strive to avoid cruel, stupid, irritable, rude people. There are a lot of stereotypes in our society, which make us to judge people by appearances. We often think that people with irregular features, for example protrude chin, hooked nose, ugly face may be angry, hypocritical or vain. People with beautiful features and constitution usual attract us and make us think that they are intelligent, polite and clever. However, appearance often deceptive. But one thing we know for sure: some of traits can help to achieve some aims. For example, if person diligent, stubborn, determined, he will be well in business. If person good-mannered, composed, cheerful, he can has a lot of good friends. Оur character determines our lives. It determines our achievements. It means that we ourselves can change our live if we change ourselves. However, it is difficult way and it is necessary to work much over itself. But it's worth it.

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Character.

Our character is a great part of our life. Our society involves different people with different characters. I think that it make our life more interesting. Meetings with various people make our life brighter, and allow us to see the world from different points of view. There are no ideal people in the world. However, some people have such traits that, undoubtedly, attract others. We strive to communicate with lavish, friendly, honest people. We strive to avoid cruel, stupid, irritable, rude people. There are a lot of stereotypes in our society, which make us judge people by appearances. We often think that people with irregular features like protruding chins, hooked noses, or ugly faces may be angry, hypocritical or vain. People with beautiful features usually attract us and make us think that they are intelligent, polite and clever. However, appearance is often deceptive. But one thing we know for sure: some of these traits can help to achieve some aims. For example, if one is diligent, stubborn, and determined, he will do well in business. If one is good-mannered, composed, and cheerful, he can have a lot of good friends. Оur character determines our lives. It determines our achievements. It means that we can change our lives if we change ourselves. However, it is a difficult way and it is necessary to work on it a lot. But it's worth it.

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Nice notebook entry. I noticed you were having a few problems with commas so here's a tip for you. In a sentence with three things, like when you said protrude chin, hooked nose, ugly face may be angry, you want to make sure that you add an and in the last comparison. So it would be protruded chin, hooked nose, AND an ugly face. You should do that every time you are listing 3 items with commas. I hope that helped! If you want to improve your English even more, just check out my teaching profile and we can get started. :)

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