It is snowing!
I must admit, that today's morning began miraculously for me. My father woke me up and said: " Vicky, have you already seen what is going outdoor?". "What can it be?" - I thought sleepily. But soon one idea makes my heart beat faster: "Has it really happened? Has the snow dropped out?". I immediately came running up to the window and looked out of it. Yees! It was really true. Frankly speaking, I couldn't believe my eyes at first. But then wonderful feelings overwhelmed me. Eventually I've waited for the snow. Now it is possible to enjoy winter atmosphere in full. I hope it won't melt till the New Year. Let's believe in it together, friends!
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It is snowing!
I must admit, that this morning began miraculously for me. My father woke me up and said: " Vicky, have you already seen what is going on outdoors?". "What can it be?" - I thought sleepily. But soon one idea makes my heart beat faster: "Has it really happened? Has the snow fallen?". I immediately came running up to the window and looked out of it. Yees! It was really true. Frankly speaking, I couldn't believe my eyes at first. But then wonderful feelings overwhelmed me. Eventually I've been waitinf for the snow for a long time and now it is possible to enjoy the winter atmosphere in full. I hope it won't melt till the New Year. Let's believe in it together, friends!
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It is snowing!
I must admit, that this morning began miraculously for me. My father woke me up and said: " Vicky, have you already seen what is going on outdoors?". "What can it be?" - I thought sleepily. But soon one idea makes my heart beat faster: "Has it really happened? Has the snow fallen?". I immediately came running up to the window and looked out of it. Yees! It was really true. Frankly speaking, I couldn't believe my eyes at first. But then wonderful feelings overwhelmed me. I've been waiting for the snow for a long time and now it is possible to enjoy the winter atmosphere in full. I hope it won't melt till the New Year. Let's believe in it together, friends!
Hello Vicky,
My wife would be so happy to see snow but up here it is still greyish and wet. Now I don't go out to work I don't mind if it snows either.
Just a couple of corrections. When you are focused on the actual action/duration rather than the result. you should use the present perfect continuous not simple. One phrase I added to make it more natural.
Hope this helps
Bob
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It is snowing!
I must admit, this morning began miraculously for me. My father woke me up and said: " Vicky, have you already seen what is going on outdoors?". "What can it be?" - I thought sleepily. But soon one idea makes my heart beat faster: "Has it really happened? Has the snow fallen?". I immediately came running up to the window and looked out of it. Yees! It was really true. Frankly speaking, I couldn't believe my eyes at first. But then wonderful feelings overwhelmed me. Eventually I've been waiting for the snow for a long time and now it is possible to enjoy the winter atmosphere in full. I hope it won't melt till the New Year. Let's believe in it together, friends!
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But I dont't say that this photo is made by me. I simply liked and chose it )
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this photo is from google not from your window :)
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