First day

Well, It's my first time on italki, and I don't know how to start, but I guess I have to do something to improve my English, so here I am.

The principal reason why (or 'that') I'm doing this is because I'm thinking of joining Erasmus in September of the next year (or just 'of next year'), and I'll probably have to have (or 'probably need') a decent level of English if I'm looking for (or 'to visit') places like Germany or the United Kingdom.

Also, I would like to start learning *other languages, but I don't like to be studying many languages at the same time, because I'm a person who needs to concentrate all her energy on just one thing. So I would like to improve my English intensively as soon as possible...

Very few mistakes, just use commas to separate independent clauses, and break up your sentences more to write English more idiomatically. We usually use 'the' before regions that begin with the long U sound: the Yukon, the USA, the UAE, the UK, the UN, the Ukraine (although this can be written either way, and is perhaps better written without 'the' due to historical concerns).

First day

Well, It's my first time at italki and I don't know how to start but I guess I have to do something to improve my English, so here I am.

The principal reason why I'm doing this is because I'm thinking of going on Erasmus on September of the next year and I'll probably have to have a decent level of English if I'm looking for places like Germany or United Kingdom.

Also, I would like to start learning another lenguages but I don't like to be studying many languages at the same time because I'm a person who needs to concentrate all her energy on just one thing. So I would like to improve my English intensively as soon as posible...

First day

Well, It's my first time at italki and I don't know how to start but I guess I have to do something to improve my English, so here I am.

The principal (main) reason why I'm doing this is because I'm thinking of going on Erasmus on September of the next year and I'll probably have to have a decent level of English if I'm looking for places like Germany or United Kingdom.

Also, I would like to start learning another other lenguages languages but I don't like to be studying many multiple lenguages languages at the same time because I'm a person who needs to concentrate all her my energy on just one thing. So I would like to work intensively to improve my English intensively as soon as posible...

note: I use American English so I'm not sure if "principal reason" is a common phrase in British English.

Good luck!

First day

Well, it's my first time on italki and I don't know how to start, but I guess I have to do something to improve my English, so here I am.

The principal reason why I'm doing this is because I'm thinking of going on Erasmus in September of the next year and I'll probably have to have a decent level of English if I'm looking for places like Germany or the United Kingdom.

Also, I would like to start learning other languages, but I don't like to be studying many languages at the same time because I'm a person who needs to concentrate all her energy on just one thing. So I would like to improve my English intensively as soon as possible...

First day:

Well, it's my first time at iTalki and I don't know how to start; but I guess I have to do something to improve my English...so here I am.

The principal reason I'm doing this is because I'm thinking of going on Erasmus in September, 2016 and I'll probably have to understand a decent level of English if I'm looking for places like Germany or United Kingdom.

Also, I would like to start learning another language, but I don't like to study too many languages at the same time; because I'm a person who needs to concentrate all her energy on just one thing. So I would like to improve my English intensively as soon as posible...