My first Essay
What about the life ? Sometimes I think that is write, because all things that happen it ways to other side. I feel that it´s a chain. When we like something, whatever that you like, that can be bad for you and the life show you why this does not for you. Yes i know, when you read this, you are going to think the writer is some melancholic, but is ok.
This year that come, will be the most difficult in my live, i believe that do not travel, and there are not much money. But I feel free, free from other interest.
When I think in happiness, the first thing that comes to my mind is the Tranquility, later the friends and the family.
The man in the pic.
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My first Essay
What about the life ?
Sometimes I think that is write, because all things that happen it ways to other side.
^^The meaning of this is unclear.
I feel that it´s a chain. When we you like something, whatever it is that you like, that can be bad for you, and the life shows you why this does it is not for you. Yes i know, when you read this, you are going to think the writer is some melancholic, but it's ok.
This year that come, coming/upcoming will be the most difficult in my life. i believe that do I will/should not travel, and there are is not much money. But I feel free, free from other interests.
When I think in of happiness, the first thing that comes to my mind is the Tranquility, then later the friends and the family.
The man in the pic.
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