My Artful Essence:) - part1 (please, correct it)

Suddenly I saw the nurse, so I said to my husband, "The nurse is here, that means that the doctor is off-duty now, so I can ask her for the prescription."

He replied, "Ok, but be hurry quick, because I have to be on go to my work now soon."

"Don't worry, it won't take much time," I said.
I ran run to the doctor. She tried to talk me out of my idea saying, "Your son has a good blood test The results of the blood test were good, so inflammatory process is absent  there is no inflammation. I don't see  think it's necessary to do an ultrasound procedure." I insisted, because another doctor saw the problem  so and I wanted to be sure. The doctor said to me, "Our clinic doesn't perform such procedures, we don't haven't an expert here, so you have to do it in at another clinic, therefore it will be a paid-for service."

I knew it. "We want to control our son's condition, so we are ready to pay money for it, but we have to have the a prescription where will be marked which contains his exact diagnosis and the distinct exact zone for the ultrasound diagnostic." She asked me to wait for her nurse in the waiting room. It was her mistake. When I have time to wait, I have time to think, so something unexpected could come into and something unexpected came to my mind. I came into entered the doctor's office again. "Excuse me, but I heard that there is low a law stating that if any clinic hasn't opportunity to make any cannot conduct certain treatments or research, so it has to it must make an agreement with another clinic."

She replied, "I know nothing about it."

"So, maybe your manager will know," was my reaction.

"We will have an appointment with our meet with our manageress, she can prove that our clinic can't help you."
The nurse came back. The doctor asked her to write the prescription. I repeated my question, "Well, are you going to ask your manageress about such a situation?"
The doctor offered told me to ask her myself. I responded that I could do it, but it would be another mood (?), because my patience begin to finish had begun to run out. My son can't to get control research from September (?). I proposed recommended that the doctor to talk with her manageress first. Then if it she won't wouldn't help, I will would meet with her. I advised, "Tell her that a furious mom came to you, she works in mass media and she is going to make a report about this." (I want to add that I was completely calm as the giraffe, as a stone at that moment).

Good job, but in certain places you were unclear. Also, in English, we start a new paragraph everytime someone different speaks. I wish you luck with your future writing.

My Artful Essence:) - part1 (please, correct it)

Suddenly I saw the nurse, so I said to my husband: "The nurse is here, it means that the doctor has her turn of duty now too, so I can ask for the prescription". He replied: "Ok, be quick, because I have to do my work now". "Don't worry, it won't take much time."- I said.
I ran to the doctor. She tried to talk me out of my idea saying: "Your son has a good blood test, so inflammation process is absent. I don't think it's see necessary to do an ultrasound procedure". But I continued to insisted, because another doctor saw the problem, so I wanted to be sure. The doctor said me: "Our clinic doesn't perform such procedures, we don't have an expert here, so you have to do it in another clinic, therefore it will be paid service." I knew it: "We want to control our son's condition, so we are ready to pay money for it, but we have to have the prescription where will be marked his exact diagnosis and the distinct zone for the ultrasound diagnostic." She asked me to wait her nurse in the waiting room. It was her mistake. When I have time to wait, I have time to think, so something unexpected could come into my mind. I came into the doctor's office again: "Excuse me, but I heard that there is low, that if any clinic doesn't have the opportunity to make a treatment or do research, so it has to make an agreement with another clinic." She replied: "I know nothing about this it." "So, maybe you will know" - was my reaction. "We will have an appointment with our manageress, she can prove that our clinic can't help you."
The nurse came back and the doctor asked her to write the prescription. I repeated my question: "Well, are you going to ask your manageress about such a situation?"
The doctor offered told me I could to ask her myself. I responded that I could do it, but it would be another mood, because my patience began to finish, my son can't to get control research from September. I proposed to the doctor to talk with her manageress first, then if she it won't help, I will meet with her. I advised: "Tell her that a furious mom came to you, who she works in mass media and she is going to make a report about this." ( I want to add that I was calm as a the giraffe, as a stone that moment)

Notes:

If you want to use the word "hurry" you can say "hurry up."

Yellow Highlight, like this, means I can understand it, but it doesn't make sense in English

Red Highlight, like this, means I can not understand it

Most titles, such as manager, are gender neutral.  Using the ending -ess, is rare in English.  

Very good story!  I enjoyed it.  Keep doing well! :)