Ladybirds
In my room ladybirds appear dead everyday. They lose their old intense colour which becomes brown… a pale and dirty brown. These also appear shrunk like if they would be suffering a unimaginable pain while dying. But in notwithstanding when I look them I still can feel their beauty from the past.
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Ladybirds
In my room ladybirds appear dead everyday. They lose their old intense colour which becomes brown… a pale and dirty brown. These also appear shrunk like if they would be suffering had suffered an unimaginable pain while dying. But in notwithstanding (nevertheless) when I look them I still can feel their beauty from the past.0
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