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My job
last week l made a mistake with my job, I had a 4 days vacation. before I left the office, I transferred the job to my colleague to help me deal with it but my colleague forgot to follow. When I got back to the office, one of the emails I sent to my boss, she'd reply to me about the email. In it she scolded at me, that I couldn't reply it to my client on time. I admitted to the fault and learned from it. in fact, I think it is not very important for customers because my customer dosen't require me to reply it immediately. but my boss is angry about this matter, and i feel very bad in my heart.
I understood everything :) Capitalization and tense are most of the corrections. The story occurred in the past, so it should be in the past tense.
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My job
Last week I made a mistake at my job. I had a vacation for 4 days. Before I left my office, I transfered my job to my colleague to help while I was gone. But my colleague forget to follow. After I returned to my office, one of my email I sent it to my highest leader[...?]. When she replied to me about the email, she scolded me for not replying to my client in time. I admitted the mistake and learned from it. In fact, I think it is not very important to the customer because my customer didn't require me to reply to it at once. But my leader is angry about this matter, I feel it is very bad in my heart.
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