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My job last week i made a mistake in my job,i have a vocation for 4 days,before i leave my office ,i transfer my job to my colleague to help to deal with.but my colleague forget to follow.after i reback to my office,one of my email i sent it to my highest leader ,when she reply me about the email ,she scolded me that i couldn't reply it to my client in time .i admited the mistake and learned from it.in fact,i think it is not very important to customer because my customer dosen't require me to reply it at once.but my leader is angry with this matter,i feel it is very bad to my heart.

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My job

last week l made a mistake with my job, I had a 4 days vacation. before I left the office, I transferred the job to my colleague to help me deal with it but my colleague forgot to follow. When I got back to the office, one of the emails I sent to my boss, she'd reply to me about the email. In it she scolded at me, that I couldn't reply it to my client on time. I admitted to the fault and learned from it. in fact, I think it is not very important for customers because my customer dosen't require me to reply it  immediately. but my boss is angry about this matter, and i feel  very bad in  my heart.

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I understood everything :)  Capitalization and tense are most of the corrections. The story occurred in the past, so it should be in the past tense.

 

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My job

Last week I made a mistake at my job.  I had a vacation for 4 days.  Before I left my office, I transfered my job to my colleague to help while I was gone.  But my colleague forget to follow.  After I returned to my office, one of my email I sent it to my highest leader[...?].  When she replied to me about the email, she scolded me for not replying to my client in time.  I admitted the mistake and learned from it.  In fact, I think it is not very important to the customer because my customer didn't require me to reply to it at once.  But my leader is angry about this matter, I feel it is very bad in my heart.

 

 

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