Japanese legend idol !?
She is Michisige Sayumi.
She is ex- Morning Musume and Morning Musume the eighth leader.
She is hard warker.
She is called ' the legend idol'.
She is so cute!!!!!
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Japanese legendary idol !?
She is Michisige Sayumi.She is an ex-Morning Musume member and was Morning Musume's eighth leader.
She is a hard worker.
She is called 'the legendary idol'.
She is so cute!!!!!
//道重さんは本当に可愛いですね！私は新垣里沙が大好きだけど…ｗｗ
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A Japanese idol legend!?
She is Michisige Sayumi.
She is ex- Morning Musume and Morning Musume the eighth leader.
She is a hard worker.
She is called ' the idol legend '.
She is so cute!!!!!
Hello 谷口
Some nice sentences here, just a few small corrections. Next time try to add 2 small sentences together with 'and' or 'but' to make it more fluent and also write the sentences continuously, not in a list.
All the best
Bob
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