killing my soul

Last night i made a decision. My mother told me, Would you like come with me and help me make the meal at home with your aunt, or would you prefer to stay here and kill the hens? I hate to visit my aunt, she is a noisy woman, but my another option was kill the hens, today is 23/12/2015, it's tradicional eat hens, meat and pork, because it is christmas but i have never had the guts to kill something, but that time i said " ok i'm going to kill the hens", I was with my sister but she is weaker than me, she couldn't help me, I took a knife and I took a hen, i put its feet under my right foot and i put its wings under my left foot, then i put my hand on its head, i could feel a weird sensation, i could feel its blood, warm blood. My stomach is still bad, i feel like a bad person, like a part of my soul died at when I killed those hens.

Killing my Soul

Last night I made a decision. My mother asked me, "Would you like to come with me and help me to make supper or dinner (se puede usar supper o dinner) at your aunt's house,(pusiste "stay here" y "I hate to visit my aunt" más adelante en el cuento, así que creo que debes decir "at your aunt's house) or would you prefer to stay here and kill the hens"? (yo usaría "chickens" en lugar de hens, pero hens se entiende) I hate to visit my aunt, because she is noisy all of the time, but my other option was to kill the hens.  That day was the twenty-third of December. It's traditional to eat chicken, beef, or pork, on Christmas. (aquí, creo que hablabas de carne de una vaca) I never had to kill something, but that time i said, "I'm going to kill the hens". I was with my sister, but she is weaker than me. (pero cuando escribas algo formal, hay que escribir "than I") She couldn't help me, so I took the knife and the hen, and then I put its feet under my right foot.  Then, I put its wings under my left foot,  and I put my hand on its head. I felt a weird sensation, and I could feel its warm blood. My stomach still feels bad. I feel like a bad person. It's like one part of my soul died when I killed those hens.