22/12/2015

Today I walk up at 9:00 am, then I went by my car with my wife to our company.
The road was crowded. I work today in building a Facebook app that collect user votes about a football game where they can win 1 million . I have a meeting in the morning about a software architecture. At 2:00 PM I eat the lunch which was a dish of rice and beans , it was delicious.

I woke up at 9 this morning. My wife and I drove to work.  The road was crowded.  I am working in a building  for a company that uses Facebook apps to collect user votes for football games.  The stakes ar 1 million. I had a meeting this morning about software architecture. At 2 p.m. I ate a dish of rice and beans for lunch.  It was delicious.

22/12/2015

Today I walk woke up at 9:00 am, then I went by my car (it sounds more natural if you say "I drove" instead of saying "I went by my car") with my wife to our company.
The road was crowded. I worked today in on building a Facebook app that collects user votes about a football game where they can win 1 million (1 million what?  Dollars?  Dinars?  Pounds?) . I have had a meeting in the morning about a software architecture. At 2:00 PM I eat ate the lunch which was a dish of rice and beans , it which was delicious.

Very good job Kassem.  The things that are highlighted in yellow are my suggestions for things to add.  Keep up the good work.