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Essay: Environment In spite of most people do not pay attention to environment problems, maybe it would be the biggest challenge that our society will have to confront. In any other way the future could be too dark to the next generations. Most CO2 emissions derive from transport; therefore, this kind of emissions is produced massively every day by vehicles such as: cars, vans, lorries, planes, etc. In consequence the solution of this problem is through using fuel vehicles only when it would be strictly necessary and change them for no fuel vehicles like bicycle, which is an ecological urban vehicle. Another option is to research in new energy sources that do not produce contaminant emissions. In another point, rivers and seas are more and more contaminated by many substances. About a solution in this topic, it is indispensable that all governments in the world reach a big agreement on not discharge any contaminant in any river or sea in the Earth. But certainly it is not likely in a near future. In conclusion, I think we have to change our way to move using other ecological vehicles like bicycle. Moreover, from my point of view, people in our society have to change their mentality to take measures to reduce the environmental impact over river, seas or any aquatic element with an ecological value.

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Essay: Environment

Most people do not pay attention to the environmental problem. It might be the biggest challenge that our society will have to face. If nothing is done, the future could be dark for the next several generations.


Most CO2 emissions derive from transport; therefore, these kind of emissions are produced massively every day by vehicles such as: cars, vans, lorries, planes, and etc. Using fueled vehicles only when necessary and/or exchanging them for non-fueled vehicles such as bicycles is the solution to the problem. Bicycles are categorized as ecological urban vehicles. Researching new energy sources that do no produce contaminant emissions is another option to resolving the environmental problem.

 

Another point is that rivers and seas are increasingly contaminated by various substances. It is indispensable that all governments in the world reach a consensus to refrain from discharging any contaminant in any river or sea on earth. It is certainly not likely to happen in the near future. 

 

In conclusion, I think we have to change our transportation options such as using other ecological vehicles like bicycles. Moreover, from my point of view, people in our society have to change their mentality to take measures to reduce the environmental impact over rivers, seas or any aquatic element with an ecological value.

 

Suggestion: "Another point is that rivers and seas...." (follow up this point by giving some examples of some of the substances to which you are referring [i.e. aluminum cans, wood, and etc].

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Cosas del gobierno, que no tiene mucho interés en invertir dinero en la preservación de los bosques, datos en mano.
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Reading your post reminded me, I heard that in Spain there was a kind of law so nobody could build on places which have suffered a fire until 20 years after the fire. And it was a really good law because the avoided Construction Companies starting fires on forest and that kind of stuffs. Then I heard that recently that law was abolished, and as soon as it was, misteriously, fires started happening on many forest in Spain. It made me hate a little bit people who rules about those kind of laws, there, in Spain.

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