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Essay: Environment
Most people do not pay attention to the environmental problem. It might be the biggest challenge that our society will have to face. If nothing is done, the future could be dark for the next several generations.
Most CO2 emissions derive from transport; therefore, these kind of emissions are produced massively every day by vehicles such as: cars, vans, lorries, planes, and etc. Using fueled vehicles only when necessary and/or exchanging them for non-fueled vehicles such as bicycles is the solution to the problem. Bicycles are categorized as ecological urban vehicles. Researching new energy sources that do no produce contaminant emissions is another option to resolving the environmental problem.
Another point is that rivers and seas are increasingly contaminated by various substances. It is indispensable that all governments in the world reach a consensus to refrain from discharging any contaminant in any river or sea on earth. It is certainly not likely to happen in the near future.
In conclusion, I think we have to change our transportation options such as using other ecological vehicles like bicycles. Moreover, from my point of view, people in our society have to change their mentality to take measures to reduce the environmental impact over rivers, seas or any aquatic element with an ecological value.
Suggestion: "Another point is that rivers and seas...." (follow up this point by giving some examples of some of the substances to which you are referring [i.e. aluminum cans, wood, and etc].
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