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The day after the elections has been quite entertaining. As it was thought predicted, none of the political parties got the necessary votes to rule the country on their own, which will force them to negotiate.
The Popular Party, the one which won the elections, got 63 seats less than in the previous elections. Everyone One would think that it is a complete failure, but their leader does not think so. Although inwardly he must be beaten, he keeps saying that he is happy with the results.
The Socialist Party came second, but they got their worst results of all time. Nevertheless, their chief claims that they got amazingly good results. I wonder who his advisor is.
A new political party called Podemos was the one that getting got the best results, given that they got 69 seats in their first elections. However once again, their leader as the aforementioned talks nonsense. He states that the majority of voters want a left wing government, which means being economical with the truth.
All of them, together with the leader of another party called Ciudadanos, are unable to acknowledge their mistakes, and to take the blame for them. The worst part of it all is that if they don't come to an agreement soon, the elections will have to take place again, which will be unbearable for the country and for all of us.
Grammatically, your writing is almost perfect. My corrections are more suggestions about writing style.
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