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I bought BB-8 (≧▽≦)
I bought BB-8 on inpulse last Saturday.
This is a kind of a radio-controlled toy.
Actually, it is a bluetoothe-controlled toy.
When you To control BB-8, you need to install an application to control to your i-phone.
After you install ited, you can comunicate with BB-8 through the application.
At tThis time, the communications are a few, (for example, move, say yes and no, etc.) only to have fun with some of its some cute reactions.
But someday, I guess within a year, when the application's version is up, I can talk with bb-8 like Siri sili.
The application is the knowledge of this toy. So, If the application will improves, bb-8 will also grow up.
But within a year.... Because, the company have has to make money to develop new products or applications.
Then they will introduce us new products, I mean new bb-8. Till the time comes will come, i I will enjoy the time with this toy.
おつかれさまです!BB-8は楽しそうです。^^
Good job! That sounds like a really fun toy. :)
英語のスペリングはめんどくさいですね。繰り返した文字で気をつけてください。
English spelling is a pain, even for native speakers! Please watch out for double letters.
「If」のフレーズについて、後半で未来形を使ったら、前半で現在形を使ったほうがいい。たとえば、"If you do that, you will be sorry." ("do" は現在形で、"will be"は未来形です)
もし前半で過去形を使ったら、後半で条件法を使ってください。
たとえば、"If I did that, I would never forgive myself." ("did"は過去形で、"would forgive"は条件法です)
When you're using "if" statements, if you use future tense in the second half, you should use present tense in the first half. If you use past tense in the first half, you need a conditional like "would" or "could" in the second half.
I put parentheses in one of your sentences because it was long, to make it easier to read.
I'm sure your English is better than my Japanese! I hope these explanations are helpful. Keep up the good work!
がんばってね!^^
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