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Another day Today was leisure day. I woke up very late, I even would say that it was too late to do something valuable. Anyway after that I went to fitness club. But I couldn't say that training was successful. Now at home I think that I could train much harder. Also I didn't swim today though the swimming pool was almost free. But there I have one reason: the weather is very cold the last few days so there is no wish to go into cold water. Then I came back home and continued wasting time. I hate myself because I have no will to do right things instead of surfing in the Internet. Lastly I watched a quite intersting movie. It's called "The place beyond the pines" and contains really good actor play by Bradley Cooper and Ryan Gosling. The plot consists of two parts: first one is about the bank robber story which slightly turns to the cop story who shouted the robber, second one occurs fifteen years later and it's about the robber and the cop sons(Sorry for spoilers:) ). In my opinion it would be better to focus only on first story line, especially on Ryan Gosling character(the robber). I will be very grateful if you correct my mistakes.

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Another day

Today was a leisure day (day off?). I woke up very late, I even would even say that it was too late to do anything valuable. Anyway after that I went to the fitness club, but I couldn't say that training was successful. Now at home I think that I could train (could have trained - to reference the training session in the morning) much harder. Also I didn't swim today though the swimming pool was almost deserted/empty. But there I have one reason: the weather has been very cold the last few days so I have no desire to go into cold water.
Then I came back home and continued wasting time. I hate myself because I have no will to do good things instead of surfing in the Internet.
Lastly I watched a fairly interesting movie. It's called "The place beyond the pines" and has really good acting from/rapport between Bradley Cooper and Ryan Gosling. The plot consists of two parts: first one is about the bank robber story which turns almost into the cop story who shouted (shot?) the robber, the second one occurs fifteen years later and it's about the robber and the cop's sons(Sorry for spoilers:) ). In my opinion it would have been better to focus only on first story line, especially on Ryan Gosling character(the robber).


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