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The rain sometime when i see the rain, i start to think about you, because i know the heaven can not raindrops spilling more than when I hurt your heart.

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The rain

Sometimes when I see the rain, I start to think about you, because I know the heavens can not. Raindrops spill more when I hurt your heart.

 

Joshua...I love this poem. Good Job.

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Beautiful!

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