Tired of this life...

Have you ever been tired of your life? Tired, that no matter how hard you try, you never get what you really want... Tired that other people are always  better than you... tired that you always get ignored or rejected... That's exactly how I feel now.

Hello Emily,

Everyone has good days and bad days, you learn to get through the bad ones. Look at the things around you that you do have to be thankful for. You have a roof over your head, food in your belly and obviously and education. So now look in the mirror and smile at yourself and say thank you for all the things you do have.

Don't compare yourself to others, you don't know how they really feel - just the face they choose to show you. I learned this the hard way, and sometimes I still have doubts. I just look at my history now and think - Hey it isn't so bad after all.

Be positive just a couple of small corrections, 'always' is an adverb and while adverbs do come before verbs there is one exception - the verb 'be'. Adverbs go after the verb  'be'

Hope this helps and that tomorrows post is a lot more positive - remember  :)

Bob

Tired of this life...

Have you ever been tired of your life? Tired that no matter how hard you try, you never get what you really want; Tired that other people are always are better than you; tired that you always get ignored or rejected. That's exactly how I feel now.

Three dots '...' are called as ellipsis and signify continuation. There use should be avoided more than once in written English. 

They are also used in a situation when one says something but it's difficult to explain it further and it is left on to the reader to interpret the said thing. 

There are multiple sentences that put forth some kind of interconnected situation of your hardship, so, a semicolon should be the preferred choice instead of ellipsis.