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This week was hard This week started on monday my boss woke up sick , he called me and told me josh i think You'll have to come to my home to looking for paint Shop key, I asked to him, what's wrong ? And he told me I don't feel good, i was at hospital on Sunday and the doctor told me I have to rest for a couple of days at least 6 days, when he told me that, there started my problems , maybe you're asking yourself why ? The problem was that I only have 3 months working in the paint shop, the hotels started to call me about their orden and when I gonna sent it , I was making me crazy , people went to visit the paint shop while I was talking witn the hotels or making some cotization, I had to help people at the same time, I got a big hotel orden and to be honest I didnt know what to do . But in the end I did that I had to do . But was a hard week

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This week was hard

This week started on Monday when my boss woke up sick. He called me and told me, " Josh, I think you'll have to come to my home to look for the paint shop key.  I asked to him, "What's wrong?" and he told me, "I don't feel good, I was at hospital on Sunday and the doctor told me I have to rest for a few days, at least 6 days."  When he told me that, that's when my problems started. Maybe you're asking yourself why? The problem was that I have only been working three months in the paint shop. The hotels started to call me about their orders and when I was going to send it , I started going  crazy. People went to visit the paint shop while I was talking with the hotels, or while making some cotization, I had to help people at the same time. I got a big hotel order and to be honest I didnt know what to do, but in the end I did what I had to do. But it was a hard week

 

a couple = two

People say 'gonna', but they write "going to" (except in animes and some novels).

 

Good work.  Just be more careful about how you use punctuation.

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This week was hard.

This week started on Monday. My boss woke up sick, he called me and told me Then he called me "Josh, I think you'll have to come to my home to looking for the paint shop key". I asked to him, what's wrong? And he told me "I don't feel good, I was at hospital on Sunday and the doctor told me I have to rest for a couple of days at least 6 days. When he told me that, there started my problems I started having problems. Maybe you're asking yourself why ? The problem was that is that I only have 3 months working experience in the paint shop. The hotels started to call me about their order and when I gonna sent it , it was making me crazy. People went to visit the paint shop while I was talking witn with the hotels or making some cotization estimation. I had to help people at the same time. I got a big hotel order and to be honest I didn't know what to do. But in the end, I did that what I had to do. But was a hard week.

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