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Dialy12-18-2015
My son go to dance lesson two days from tomorrow.
He will stays in the hotel.
He leave from parent is first time.
I hope enjoy my son.
Diary* 12-18-2015
My son will* go to dance lesson two days 3 days from now. (based on my understanding on what you're trying to say, but correct me if I'm wrong.)
He will stay in the hotel.
He will be leaving away from us* for the first time.
I hope my son will* enjoy.
I paraphrased some words. I hope this helps! :)
Diary 12-18-2015
My son is going to dance lessons in two three days time. from tomorrow.
He will stays in the hotel. This will be the first time he is away from his parents.
He leave from parent is first time.
I hope he will enjoy it my son.
Diary 12-18-2015
My son is going to dance lesson in three days time. He will stay in a hotel. It is his first time away from his parents.
I hope my son enjoys himself.
Hello Hiro,
I am sure he will enjoy himself.
I have reworded some parts to make them more natural, remember the correct spelling for diary - there is a 'r' sound. Your tongue does not touch the roof of your mouth when making this sound, the whole lower jaw drops.
Hope this helps
Bob
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