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description Every summer I with my family go away abroad. So, last summer we decided to set out for Austria and got round to book some tickets. It was very interesting traveling. Primarily, my father had asked his friend for dropping us off outside the airport Sheremetevo. My grandparents saw us off. Dick picked us off and started to drive. Of course, how it happens. It turned out that we had forgotten our passports, we turned out and my mother had to get back after its. So, that was only in the beginning of out tour. Second accident happen when Dick can barely ran over a man, crossing the road. He pulled in and got his breath. We carried on our trip. After this situation Dick looked out and drive very slowly. Because of these accidents we went to the airport very late, we had to hurry. I had so many bags that I should catch up with parents. It was awful, I could not keep up with them. We made for the registration. Fortunately, our flight had been put of, it had been bring forward. All this beginning went me off, but I put up with my destiny. In two hours we was sitting in the plane. And three hours later our plane took off. When we went to the Austria, parents checked in us in a hotel. In the evening it was a competition because of the local holiday. I would like to go in for in this competition. So, I joined in it. But I was so tired after all this day, I pulled out and knocked out of this competition. I went to my room and took up to unpack my bags. It was good holidays after this awful beginning. I think that I took to this country and I would have remembered this tour for a long time.

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Every summer my family and I with my family go away abroad. So, last summer, we decided to set out for Austria and got round to booked some tickets. It was very interesting traveling. Primarily Firstly, my father had asked his friend for to dropping us off outside the airport Sheremetevo airport. My grandparents saw us off. Dick picked us off up and started to drive. Of course, this is how it happens. It turned out that we had forgotten our passports. We turned out around and my mother had to get go back after its and get them. So, that was only in the beginning of our tour. The second accident to happen, was when Dick can barely almost ran over a man crossing the road. He pulled in over and got caught his breath. We carried on with our trip. After this situation, Dick kept a looked out and drove very slowly. Because of these accidents, we went to arrived at the airport very late. We had to hurry. I had so many bags that I should had to catch up with my parents. It was awful. I could not keep up with them. We made for the registration. Fortunately, our flight had been put of, it had been bring forward. All This (negative adjective like unfortunate or horrible) beginning went put me off, but I put up with my destiny continued on with our trip.  In two hours, we was were sitting in on the plane and three hours later, our plane took off. When we went to the Austria, my/our parents checked in us into a hotel. In the evening, it there was a competition because of the local holiday. I would like wanted to go in for in this competition. So, I joined in it. But I was so tired after all this day that had happened, I pulled out and knocked out of this the competition. I went to my room and took up started to unpack my bags. It was a good holidays (or vacation) after this awful beginning. I think that I took to liked this country and I will have remembered this tour for a long time.

 

 made for: this makes sense but isn't generally used (could also use made towards or made our way to) 

had been put of, it had been bring forward: the flight was delayed? I couldn't understand this sentence. I'm sorry :( 

continued on with our trip: This sounds more natural  



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