This is my speech for my tomorrow oral exam,can you give me some suggestion or correct it?

As we all know,there are many lifestyles for us to live,and they differ from one to another. First I want to ask all of you a question:what are you feel when you are alone?bored?Monotony?unhappy? Or other? Absolutely,different persons have various feelings.
Today the topic I want to talk about is why don't we enjoy alone when we stay with ourselves? Most people think when they stay alone,it seems like they are abandoned,they could not tolerant alone.
To me,sometime I enjoy with many friends around,eating,talking and generally being cordia. But I am also fond of staying with myself. Some people can not understand my thought. Today I will tell you what stay alone can bring us. First,we are free when we stay alone,we can do everything we want. Secondly,stay alone will provide an opportunity for us to excel and advance (I prefer to use "develop" here rather than "advance") . Thirdly,a person will be himself entirely completely when he stays alone,he can talk with himself and think what he wants really,it is the best time for him to ponder deeply.
Actually,life would not always give you what you want,it is inevitable that you alone,confuse and depress for a period of time. However,don't feel that life is emptiness,at that time,you can stay with yourself,to read a book,do something you like,lose the things which make you feel burden momentarily. After you went through the low point in your life,the day you stay alone can make you be a better person. So loneliness is not so bad.
In the past,I always think stay myself is lonely,it makes me feel embarrassing when I do everything. But after experiencing something,now I really enjoy stay alone,it is a fantastic moment that makes me absolutely relaxed and pleased. Even I just read a book,listen to music, watch a film or finish my homework,it makes me feel fulfilled and satisfied.
In a word,we can always enjoy with our good friend,also,we can enjoy alone,right?

 Actually,life would not always give you what you want,it is inevitable that you are alone,confused and depressed for a period of time. However,don't feel life is emptiness empty,at that time,you can stay with be by yourself,to read a book,do something you like,lose the things which make you feel burden momentarily. After you go through the low points in your life,the day you stay are alone can make you be a better person. So loneliness is not so bad. 

In the past,I always think thought stay being by myself is was lonely,it makes made me feel embarrassing embarrassed when I do everything did anything. But after experiencing something,now I really enjoy stay being alone,it is a fantastic moment and it makes me absolutely relaxed and pleased. Even I just reading a book,listening to music, watching a film or finishing my homework,it makes me feel fulfilled and satisfaction.
In a word,we can always enjoy being with our good friend,also, so we can also enjoy being alone,right?

This is my speech for my tomorrow oral exam,can you give me some suggestion or correct it?

As we all know,there are many lifestyles for us to live,and they differ from one to another. First I want to ask all of you a question:what are do you feel when you are alone?bored?Monotony?unhappy? Or other? Absolutely,different persons have various feelings.
Today the topic I want to talk about is why don't we enjoy being alone or when we stay with are by ourselves? Most people think when they stay are alone,it seems like they are abandoned,they could cannot tolerant tolerate being alone.
To me,sometime I enjoy it with many friends around,eating,talking and generally being cordia social. But I am also fond of stay with being by myself. Some people can not understand my thought. Today I will tell you what stay being alone can bring us. First,we are free when we stay are alone,we can do everything anything we want. Secondly,stay being alone will provide an opportunity for us to excel and advance. Thirdly,a person will be himself entirely completely when he stay is alone,he can talk with himself and think what he wants really,it is the best time for him to ponder deeply.