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please help me correct it, thank you! China is now the world's largest auto market, localize the vehicle intellectual technology development in China will have a huge impact to the auto industry has becoming a consensus among the major auto industry. According to the research, 88%of interviewee in China have a great interest in trying to dive a automatic drive car, this figer are much higher than Europe and Germany. Director Weirui belive that Chinese consumers like the automatic driving very much, China must be the first country to use autonomous vehicle technology and will be the critical market of automatic vehicle. The cooperation with internet company can be very helpful to the research and development of autonomous vehicle technology. At present, BMW already have cooperate with Baidu, the project they research together involved 6 contents: vehicle using, driving tactics, high precision three-dimensional map, supporting infrastructure, relevant law and industry standard .As a famous IT companies, Baidu not only aimed at vehicle sensors, decision and control system, but also focus on the stage of data collecting, work on drawing the first high precision three-dimensional map in China. In addition to Baidu ,BMW also had cooperated with Tencent, and maintaine good communication with Alibaba and Xiaomi.

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please help me correct it, thank you!

China is now the world's largest auto market. The localized the vehicle intellectual technology development* in China will have a huge impact to on the auto industry has becoming a consensus among the major auto industry**. According to the research, 88% of interviewees in China have a great interest in trying to dive a driving automatic drive cars. This figuer are is much higher than in Europe and Germany. Director Weirui belives that Chinese consumers like to drive the automatics driving very much. China must be the first country to use autonomous vehicle technology and will be the critical market of automatic vehicle.***
Cooperation with an internet company can be very helpful to for the research and development of autonomous vehicle technology. At present, BMW already have has cooperated with Baidu, which is the Chinese version GoogleMaps. The project they research together involved 6 aspectscontents: vehicle using, driving tactics, high precision three-dimensional map, supporting infrastructure, relevant law and industry standard. As a famous IT companyies, Baidu not only aimed at vehicle sensors, decision making (?) and control systems, but is also focusing on the first (?) stage of data collecting, and is also working on drawing the first high precision three-dimensional map in China. In addition to Baidu, BMW also had cooperated with Tencent, and maintaines good communication with Alibaba and Xiaomi.

 

*What does this phrase actually mean?

** A very long run-on sentence. Try to break it up into two different sentences.

*** I think I understand what you are saying in this sentence, but it would be helpful for the reader if you explained, very briefly, what autonomous vehicle technology is. You have been talking about automatic cars so far, so now would be a good time to explain this new technology. 


Great work Wang Yuwei! This is a really interesting topic! I recently came back from Beijing and noticed that they have so many more cars than my hometown! It was amazing! 

Keep up the good writing and try to remember to properly pluralize your words! 

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Today China is the world's largest automobile market. There is a developing consensus among major automobile industries in China that the localization of the vehicular intellectual technology development will have a huge impact on the automobile industry. According to a research, 88% of interviewees in China have a great interest in trying to drive an automatic car, this figure is significantly higher as compared to the figures from European countries. Director Weirui believes that the Chinese consumers prefer to drive automatic vehicles. China must be the first country to use autonomous vehicular technology and will be the critical market of automatic vehicles. 

The cooperation with an internet company can be very helpful for the research and development of autonomous vehicular technology. At present, BMW already has cooperation with Baidu. The project involves 6 contents: vehicle using, driving tactics, high precision three-dimensional map, supporting infrastructure, relevant law and industry standard. As a famous IT company, Baidu not only aimed at vehicle sensors, decision and control system, but is also focusing on the stage of data collecting, working on compiling the first high precision three-dimensional map in China. In addition to Baidu, BMW has also cooperated with Tencent, and maintained a good relationship with Alibaba and Xiaomi.
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