Do our clothes influence our behavior?

Our behavior has an important role in our lives. We are known by our behavior. Some may think our clothing doesn't influence our behavior because it can't change us, while others disagree. I think that we behave differently when we wear different clothes.

The main reason for this is that people, especially strangers, judge us by our appearance, and different clothing gives us a different appearance. Therefore, we will be reacted to differently by others (or, others will react differently to us) when we wear different clothes. As a result, in order to respond to people's reactions, we will behave differently. For instance, when I was attending university in Tehran, I tried a lot of different clothes. You may not believe it (or, You may find it hard to believe), but if you don't wear formal clothes when you should do so (or, when it is appropriate to do so), people do not take you seriously. Once I was in a scientific conference for which I had prepared a significant article; I was not dressed appropriately and it affected me badly. So, at first I was not so sure that I wanted to give my presentation. I can say that no one took me seriously before giving my presentation. Even though after my presentation they changed their minds, I did not do well at first and it took me a while to recover my confidence. As you can see, because of the way I was attired, I was about to fall into trouble (or, encounter difficulties).

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Do our clothes influence our behaviors ?

Our behavior has an important role in our lives. We are known by our behaviors. Some may think our clothes do not influence our behavior because it can't change us; others disagree. I think that we behave differently when we wear different clothes, for one main reason.

People, especially strangers, judge us by our appearance and different clothes give us a different appearance. Therefore, we will be reacted seen differently by others when we wear different clothes. As a result, in order to response people's reactions we will behave differently. For instance, when I was in university in Tehran, I tried a lot of different clothes. You may not believe but if you don't wear formal clothes when you should do that, people do not take you seriously. Once I was in a scientific conference and I prepared a significant article. But I did not wear appropriately clothing, and it affected me badly. So, at first I was not so sure that I wanted to give my presentation. I can say that no one took me seriously before giving my presentation. Even though after my presentation minds changed, but I did not do well at first and it took me a while to recover my confidence. As you can see, because of the way I wore I was about to fall in trouble.

Do our clothes influence our behaviors ?

Our behavior has an important role in our lives. We are known by our behaviors. Some may think our clothes do not influence our behavior because it can't change us; others disagree. I think that we behave differently when we wear different clothes, for one main reason.

People, especially strangers, judge us by our appearance and different clothes give us different appearance(s). Therefore, we will be reacted to differently by others when we wear different clothes. As a result, in order to respond people's reactions we will behave differently. For instance, when I was in university in Tehran, I tried a lot of different clothes. You may not believe it but if you don't wear formal clothes when you should do (no "that" here), people do not take you seriously. Once I was in a scientific conference and I prepared a significant article. But I did not dress appropriately and it effected me badly. So, at first I was not so sure that I wanted to give my presentation. I can say that no one took me seriously before giving my presentation. Even though after my presentation my mind's changed, but I did not do well at first and it took me a while to recover my confidence. As you can see, because of the way I dressed I was about to fall in trouble.

Do our clothes influence our behaviors ?

Our behavior has an important role in our lives. We are known by our behaviors. Some may think our clothes do not influence our behavior because it can't change us; others disagree. I think that we behave differently when we wear different clothes, for one main reason.

People, especially strangers, judge us by our appearance and different clothes give us different appearance. Therefore, we will be reacted differently by others when we wear different clothes. As a result, in order o response people's reactions we will behave differently. For instance, when I was in university in Tehran, I tried a lot of different clothes. You may not believe but if you don't wear formal clothes when you should do that, people do not take you seriously. Once I was in a scientific conference and I prepared a significant article. But I did not wear appropriately and it effected me badly. So, at first I was not so sure that I wanted to give my presentation. I can say that no one took me seriously before giving my presentation. Even though after my presentation minds changed, but I did not do well at first and it took me a while to recover my confidence. As you can see, because of the clothes I wore I was about to fall in trouble.

Do our clothes influence our behaviors ?

Our behavior has an important role in our lives. We are known by our behaviors. Some may think our clothes do not influence our behavior because it can't change us; others disagree. I think that we behave differently when we wear different clothes, for one main reason.

People, especially strangers, judge us by our appearance and different clothes give us different appearance. Therefore, we will be (judged) (xxreacted) differently by others when we wear different clothes. As a result, in order to (respond) (xxresponse) (to) people's reactions we will behave differently. For instance, when I was in university in Tehran, I tried a lot of different clothes. You may not believe but if you don't wear formal clothes when you should, people do not take you seriously. Once I was in a scientific conference and I prepared a significant article. But I did not wear appropriately and it effected me badly. So, at first I was not so sure that I wanted to give my presentation. I can say that no one took me seriously before giving my presentation. Even though after my presentation minds changed, but I did not do well at first and it took me a while to recover my confidence. As you can see, because of (What I wore) (xxthe way I wore) I was about to fall in trouble.