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My job 我的工作 I'm live in Tianjin(天津),China, which is about half an hour’s ride by train from Beijing(北京). 我来自中国的天津,从北京坐火车的话大概需要半个小时。 I'm working in the Strategic Development Department of United Metal Merantile Exchange Center. 我在天津联合冶金交易中心的战略发展部工作。 My work time is 8:30am-5:00pm 我的工作时间是8:30-17:00 I do some administration work, and I’m also responsible for statistical analysis . 我做些行政方面的工作,也负责统计分析。 I like my job,because it serves my interest and I’ve learned much from it. 我喜欢我的工作,它符合我的兴趣,而且我也从中学到了很多东西。 But in a sense, it is challenging, too, as I have to ensure that my performance meets the expectation of my boss. 但是从某种意义上来说,它也具有挑战,因为我必须确保我的表现能达到老板的期望。 My working experience has enabled me to deal efficiently with many tasks that I used to find difficult.For example, I wasn’t a well-organized person, but now I’ve learned how to make the best of my time.Besides, my working experience has somehow transformed me into a responsible person- an image quite different from what I used to be like. 我的工作经验能让我有效的处理很多过去我觉得困难的工作。比如,以前的我不懂得有条理地去安排各种事情,但是我现在已经知道如何安排时间。除此之外,我的工作经验已经使我变成一个负责任的人,一个和以往不同的人。 I would consider changing my job, not because I dislike it, but because I’ve come to a point in my life when I feel like becoming a student again and fully exposing myself to a field of knowledge that I’m interested to explore. 我会考虑换工作,并不是我不喜欢这份工作,而是因为我到了人生的某个阶段,我想要重新做回学生,学习更多的知识。

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My job 我的工作

I'm live in Tianjin(天津),China, which is about half an hour by train from Beijing(北京).
我来自中国的天津,从北京坐火车的话大概需要半个小时。
I'm working in the Strategic Development Department of United Metal Merantile Exchange Center.
我在天津联合冶金交易中心的战略发展部工作。
My shifts last from 8:30am-5:00pm
我的工作时间是8:30-17:00
I do some administration work, and I’m also responsible for statistical analysis .
我做些行政方面的工作,也负责统计分析。
I like my job,because it interests me and I’ve learned a lot from it.
我喜欢我的工作,它符合我的兴趣,而且我也从中学到了很多东西。
But in a sense, it is challenging, too, as I have to ensure that my performance meets the expectation of my boss. (Good Sentence)
但是从某种意义上来说,它也具有挑战,因为我必须确保我的表现能达到老板的期望。
My working experience has enabled me to deal efficiently with many tasks that I used to find difficult.For example, I wasn’t an well-organized person, but now I’ve learned how to make the best of my time.Besides, my working experience has somehow transformed me into a responsible person- an image quite different from what I used to be like. (You write very well)
我的工作经验能让我有效的处理很多过去我觉得困难的工作。比如,以前的我不懂得有条理地去安排各种事情,但是我现在已经知道如何安排时间。除此之外,我的工作经验已经使我变成一个负责任的人,一个和以往不同的人。
I sometimes(maybe) consider changing my job, not because I dislike it, but because I’ve come to a point in my life when I feel like becoming a student again in order to fully expose myself to a field of knowledge that I’m interested in exploring.
我会考虑换工作,并不是我不喜欢这份工作,而是因为我到了人生的某个阶段,我想要重新做回学生,学习更多的知识。

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My job

I live in Tianjin ,China, Which is about half an hour’s ride by train from Beijing. 

I'm working in the Strategic Development Department of United Metal Merantile Exchange Center.
My work time is 8:30am-5:00pm 

I do some administrative work, and I’m also responsible for statistical analysis.
I like my job because it serves my interests and I’ve learned much from it.
But in a sense, it is challenging, too, as I have to ensure that my performance meets the expectation of my boss.

My working experience has enabled me to deal efficiently with many tasks that I used to find difficult. For example, I wasn’t a well-organized person, but now I’ve learned how to make the best of my time. Besides, my working experience has somehow transformed me into a responsible person - an image quite different from what I used to be like.

I would consider changing my job, not because I dislike it, but because I’ve come to a point in my life where I feel like becoming a student again and fully exposing myself to a field of knowledge that I’m interested in exploring.

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