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My nightmare yourney! My nightmare yourney! It was the Summer of 2008. It was my vacation. A friend of mine and I were planning to travel.We dreamt of the sea and decided to go south. After some discussion we made a decision to go by bus. We understood that it could be a difficult journey, because traveling by bus for a long distance is not easy to stand. But there were also advantages: it costed not so pricey as travelling by train and by plane. So, we booked the tickets and began to look forward this day of departure. Then here came that day! We were so exited and happy to drive off at last. After a half an hour of our journey, the bus stopped. A stuard said the bus needed to repair. We had no choice but waiting. We had been waiting for about 2 hours. Having been repaired, the bus was ready to go on. But after about one hour our bus broke down again. We became irritated.But this time we had to wait for another bus, because our bus broke and the driver couldn't repaire it on his own. We had been waiting for another bus more than two hours in the heat. People got angry, they wanted to drink and eat. Children were crying. It was like a nightmare. Another bus arrived only in 4 hours. We all were upset and very tired. We were so exhausted. Due to this fact, we went to south 5 hours later, exausted and feeling bad. After that we decided not to travel by bus ever.

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My nightmare yourney!

My nightmare yjourney!
It was the Summer of 2008. It was my vacation. A friend of mine and I were planning to travel. We dreamed of going to the sea and decided to go south. After some discussion we made a decision to go by bus. We understood that it could be a difficult journey, because traveling by bus for a long distance is not easy to stand. But there were also advantages: it costed was not soas pricey as travelling by train andor by plane.
So, we booked the tickets and began to look forward to the this day of departure.
Then here came that day! The day finally came!
We were so exited and happy to drive off at last.
After a half an hour of our journey, the bus stopped. A stuard steward said the bus needed to be repaired. We had no choice but to waiting. We had been waiting for about 2 hours.
Having been repaired, the bus was ready to go on. But after about one hour our bus broke down again. We became irritated. But this time we had to wait for another bus, because our bus broke and the driver couldn't repaire it on his own. We had been waiting for another bus for more than two hours in the heat.
People got angry, because they wanted to drink and eat. Children were crying. It was like a nightmare.
Another bus finally arrived only in 4 hours. We all were upset and very tired. We were so exhausted. Due to this fact, we went to arrived south 5 hours later, exhausted and feeling bad. After that, we decided not to never travel by bus ever again.

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My nightmare journey!

My nightmare journey!
It was the Summer of 2008. It was my vacation(holiday). Together with a friend of mine and I we were planning to travel. We dreamt of the sea and decided to go south. After some discussion we made a decision to go by bus. We understood that it could be a difficult journey, because travelling by bus for a long distance is not easy to stand., but there were also advantages: it's costed not so pricey expensive as travellling by train and or by plane.
So, we booked the tickets and began to look forward to the day of departure.
Then here came that day arrived!
We were so exited and happy to drive off at last. (.. to set off ..)
After a half an hour of our journey, the bus stopped. A steward said the bus needed to be repaired. We had no choice but to waiting. We had been waiting for about 2 hours.
Having been repaired, the bus was ready to go on, but after about one hour our bus broke down again. We became irritated, but this time we had to wait for another bus, because our bus broke and the driver couldn't repaire it on his own. We had been waiting in the heat more than two hours for another bus.
People got angry, they wanted to drink and eat. Children were crying. It was like a nightmare.
It was four hours before another bus arrived only in 4 hours. We all were all upset and very tired. We were so exhausted. Due to this fact, we went to arrived in the south 5 hours later, exausted and feeling bad. After that we decided not never to travel by bus ever.

 

Unfortunately similar problems occur with all forms of transport Tanya... Because of a fault with an aircraft, I was stuck at an airport for 18 hours with nowhere to sleep except the floor...(This year!)

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I'm not a teacher, so I won't correct anything. Maybe the only sentence I would correct is: ... it costed cheaper than traveling... I'm not shure about this correction. Anyway, what a bad experience!

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