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Could you please correct my transcription? http://www.bbc.com/news/world-africa-34742994 At the entrance of the hospital, you get a hint of the tough conditions here. This is the biggest health facilities serving a remote and hostile region in Northeast Kenya. In the maternity word, I found Ibrahim with her premature infant. She tells me her baby was dropped unexpectedly from her womb in the early hours of the morning. She was 4 hours away from the hospital and all alone. She said, "Latter I got a break and I called for help, neighbours took me to a hospital in a taxi. That's way I could see a doctor." She and her baby are luck to be alive. More women died giving birth in Mandera. It's worse than any parts of the world. It has nothing to do with harmful practices like early marriage and female genital mutilation. The head of nursing at Mandera Hospital said, "Women don't allow men to deliver them. So women or maternities are like to be delayed. And most of ladies are not educated enough, so it's kind of our culture. They are delivered by TBA, traditional birth attendant." Mandera hospital serves about 200 women every month, but that's a drop in the ocean which is really considering that it is the only one hospital serving a vast region in Northeast Kenya. And a couple of that in for for so many of these women it's very difficult to get to the hospital because of the poor network. Getting well trained health workers has also been a big challenge. In December three employees of the hospital were among 29 people killed by alshuberg?? Militants as they traveled by bus to Nairobi Kenya. Many of those who survived were too frightened to return. Now organizations like the UN are helping to focus more attention of Mandera and with it they hope more health care resources. The member coming from the UN said, "The best weapon I feel against dealing with the issues of the security is the weapon of the development, is the weapon of the peace and is the weapon of the health. Using the health for the peace once you started addressing that and people understand the value of the basic services, everything falls into the place because they become the guardians and the safety guardians of those services." the region is one of the at least developed in the country, but with some investment in health care and other social services now taking place. It looks like the lives of people living here will finally be improved and hopefully that would make Mandera a safer place, not just for mothers but for everyone.

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Could you please correct my transcription?

http://www.bbc.com/news/world-africa-34742994
At the entrance of the hospital, you get a hint of the tough conditions here. This is the biggest health facilities serving a remote and hostile region in Northeast Kenya.
In the maternity word ward, I found Barei Ibrahim with her premature infant. She tells me her baby was dropped unexpectedly from her womb in the early hours of the morning. She was 4 hours away from the hospital and all alone.
She said, "Latter Later at day break I got a break and I called for help, neighbours took me to a hospital in a taxi. That's way when I could see a doctor."
She and her baby are luck to be alive. More women died giving birth in Mandera. It's worse than in any other parts of the world. It A lot of it has nothing to do with harmful practices like early marriage and female genital mutilation.
The head of nursing at Mandera Hospital said, "Women don't allow men to deliver them. So women they come to maternity hospitals... (his accent is too strong in this part. I can't understand what he's saying) or maternities are like to be delayed. And most of our ladies are have not been educated enough, so it's kind of our culture. They are delivered by TBA, traditional birth attendant."

Mandera hospital serves about 200 women every month, but that's a drop in the ocean which is really considering that it is the only one hospital serving a vast region in Northeast Kenya. And a couple of that in for couple with that is the fact that for so many of these women it's very difficult to get to the hospital because of the poor road network.
Getting well trained health workers has also been a big challenge. In December three employees of the hospital were among 29 people killed by alshuberg?? Al-Shabaab Militants as they traveled by bus to Nairobi Kenya. Many of those who survived were too frightened to return.
Now organizations like the UN are helping to focus more attention of on Mandera and with it they the hope of more health care resources.
The member coming from the UN said, "The best weapon I feel against dealing with the issues of the insecurity is the weapon of the development, is the weapon of the peace and is the weapon of the health. Using the health as a place for for the peace once you started addressing that and people understand the value of the basic services that they're seeking, everything falls into the place because they become the guardians and the safety guardians of those very services."

the region is one of the at least developed in the country, but with some investment in health care and other social services now taking place. It looks like the lives of people living here will finally be improved and hopefully that would make Mandera a safer place, not just for mothers but for everyone.

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Could you please correct my transcription?

http://www.bbc.com/news/world-africa-34742994
At the entrance of the hospital, you get a hint of the tough conditions here. This is the biggest health facility serving a remote and hostile region in Northeast Kenya.
In the maternity ward, I found Ibrahim with her premature infant. She tells me her baby was dropped unexpectedly from her womb in the early hours of the morning. She was 4 hours away from the hospital and all alone.
She said, "Later I got a break and I called for help; neighbours took me to a hospital in a taxi. That's the way I could see a doctor."
She and her baby are lucky to be alive. More women died giving birth in Mandera. It's worse than any other parts of the world. It has nothing to do with harmful practices like early marriage and female genital mutilation.
The head of nursing at Mandera Hospital said, "Women don't allow men to deliver them. So women or maternities are likely to be delayed. And most of the ladies are not educated enough, so it's kind of our culture. They are delivered by TBAs, traditional birth attendants."

Mandera hospital serves about 200 women every month, but that's a drop in the ocean considering that it is the only hospital serving a vast region in Northeast Kenya.

And a couple of that in for for so many of these women it's very difficult to get to the hospital because of the poor network. (Not quite sure what you are intending to convey. The sentence doesn't read well...perhaps writing: It is also very difficult to reach the hospital because of poor road networks, would be better) 

Getting well trained health workers has also been a big challenge. In December, three employees of the hospital were among 29 people killed by alshuberg?? Militants as they traveled by bus to Nairobi Kenya. Many of those who survived were too frightened to return.
Now organizations like the UN are helping to focus more attention of Mandera and with it they hope more health care resources.
A UN member said, "The best weapon I feel against dealing with the issues of the security is the weapon of development; it's the weapon of peace and the weapon of health. Once you start addressing the value of basic services, everything falls into the place because people become the safety guardians of those services." 

The region is one of the least developed in the country, but with some investment in health care and other social services now taking place, it looks like the lives of people living here will finally be improved and hopefully that will make Mandera a safer place, not just for mothers but for everyone.

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