MY EYES IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO PROTECT OUR EYES .I THINK IF I DONNT PROTECT MY EYES,I WILL BE A BLIND IN THE FUTURE.TODAY I CHECK MY EYES IN THE HOSPITAL.THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG WITH MY EYES.ONE DAY

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MY EYES IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO PROTECT OUR EYES .I THINK IF I DONNT PROTECT MY EYES,I WILL BE A BLIND IN THE FUTURE.TODAY I CHECK MY EYES IN THE HOSPITAL.THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG WITH MY EYES.ONE DAY IF I BECOME A BLIND .I THINK I WILL KILL MYSELF.LOL

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MY EYES

IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO PROTECT OUR EYES .I THINK IF I DONNT PROTECT MY EYES,I WILL BE A BLIND IN THE FUTURE.TODAY I CHECK MY EYES IN THE HOSPITAL.THERE IS SOMETHING WRONG WITH MY EYES.ONE DAY IF I BECOME A BLIND .I THINK I WILL KILL MYSELF.LOL

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It is very important to protect our eyes. I think that if I don't protect my eyes, then I will become blind in the future. Today, I checked my eyes at the hospital and learned that I may have issues with them. If I become blind one day, I think I may kill myself (but not actually).

What is wrong with your eyes? Are you ok?

You are so funny and 楼上那个。。

Please don't kill yourself. It's very bad for your health.

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