The worst thing

Once I went back to school via the capital city. My plane flew to the capital city then I transferred by train to continue my trip. But the plane was late when it arrived in the capital city. So I missed the train.

It was mid-night and I didn't have any acquaintances in the city. I felt lonely, anxious and helpless in a train station in a  strange city. I stayed awake the whole night there until I bought another ticket in the morning. I learned an important lesson from this! I should’ve left more than three hours earlier to catch the next train.

Hello Lee,

Every experience is a learning experience be it good or bad, I am glad you learned something from your experience.

Try to put your work into paragraphs like I did. Each main theme should have its own paragraph. This way it looks much better and natural.

Hope this helps

Bob

The worst thing

Once, I went back to school via the capital city.
My plane was flew to the capital city, then transferred train to I had to take a train to continue my trip.
But the plane was late when it arrived late in the capital city.
So I missed the train.
It was midnight.
I didn't have any acquaintances in the city.
I felt lonely, anxious, and helpless, in a train station of a strange city.
I stayed awake there the whole night there, until I could buy another ticket in the morning.
I learned a lesson from this experience!
I should’ve left more than three hours earlier to catch before the next train.

What a sad story! I hope these corrections help, though :)