Please correct my short sentences
A few years ago, i have had a special event for confession of love.
I told her we will have dinner at general restaurant on purpose for make her surprise.
I made a reservation at luxurious restaurant located top floor of the high building.
The restaurant was so nice. There were live musics with piano, violin and other instruments and food was really nice and delicious.
I felt little bit uncomfortable and i thought she was the same.
Finally i couldn’t get a chance to confession. And it’s just over.
A few days later i confessed that i fall in love with you having Soju and Samgyeopsal.
And she refused me.
Thanks.
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Please correct my short sentences
A few years ago, i have had a special event for confession of love.I told her we will have dinner at general restaurant on purpose for make her surprise.
I made a reservation at luxurious restaurant located top floor of the high building.
The restaurant was so nice. There were live musics with piano, violin and other instruments and food was really nice and delicious.
I felt little bit uncomfortable and i thought she was the same.
Finally i couldn’t get a chance to confession. And it’s just over.
A few days later i confessed that i fall in love with you having Soju and Samgyeopsal.
And she refused me.
Thanks.
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Please correct my short sentences
A few years ago, i have had a planned a special event for confession of love. to confess my love to my (girlfriend?, friemd?) sounds a lot more natural if you add a subject to end of the sentance.
I told her we will have dinner at general a average restaurant on purpose for make her so I could surprise her.
Instead, I made a reservation at luxurious restaurant located on the top floor of the a high building.
The restaurant was so nice. There were was live music with piano, violin and other instruments and the food was really nice and delicious. Sounds more natural to only say nice or delicious, not both. EX "and the food was also really delicious"
I felt a little bit uncomfortable and i thought she was felt the same.
Finally i couldn’t get a chance to confession. And it’s just over. I couldn't find a change to confess, and then the dinner was over.
A few days later i confessed that i fall fell in love with you having while eating Soju and Samgyeopsal.
And she refused me.
Thanks.
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