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Richard
What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?_2 I have been buying lots of DVDs through online shopping, even from Amazon as far as the U.S. These DVDs always amaze me through their absorbing story lines, witty dialog among the characters, realistic special effect and high video quality. When watching these DVDs, I feel as if entering the fourth dimension, seemingly together with the characters fighting the bloody WWII, experiencing the Apollo 13 heroic failed moon-landing mission, or falling in love with the breathtakingly lovely girl in my life. Everything is possible in this imaginary world. Furthermore, with the English subtitle available, I am learning practical English in the most fascinating effective way while immersing myself in the intriguing scenario. In the study, my mind can be calm and peaceful if needed. When I close the door of my study, all my family knows it is my own time alone in the room and they will not disturb me unless it’s terribly urgent and important. In most cases, when faced with a difficult time, whether it has to do with my job, money or family, I will ponder it deeply and seek to find a way out all by myself, instead of discussing it with friends. In some way, my study is the holy place which offers me the strength to bravely confront challenges of life. The study is the most important room in my house to me, which even my family can’t imagine and understand. No other places can replace its unique position in my mind. I strongly suggest all my friends have such a place of their own, which can be a valuable possession in their life.

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I have been buying lots of DVDs through online shopping, even from as far as Amazon in the U.S. These DVDs always amaze me through their absorbing story lines, witty dialog among the characters, realistic special effects and high video quality. When watching these DVDs, I feel as if I'm entering the fourth dimension, seemingly together with the characters fighting the bloody WWII, experiencing the Apollo 13 heroic failed moon-landing mission, or falling in love with the breathtakingly lovely girl in my life. Everything is possible in this imaginary world. Furthermore, with the English subtitles available, I am learning practical English in the most fascinating effective way while immersing myself in the intriguing scenario. 

In the study, my mind can be calm and peaceful if needed. When I close the door of my study, all my family knows it is my own time alone in the room and they will not disturb me unless it’s terribly urgent and important. In most cases, when faced with a difficult time, whether it has to do with my job, money or family, I will ponder it deeply and seek to find a way out all by myself, instead of discussing it with friends. In some way, my study is the holy place which offers me the strength to bravely confront challenges of life. [Good!]
The study is the most important room in my house to me, which even my family can’t imagine and understand. No other places can replace its unique position in my mind. I strongly suggest all my friends have such a place of their own, which can be a valuable possession in their lives.

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