would you do me a favor? please correct my script.

If somebody asks me: “What is one thing you want to change about yourself?”, I would change my big nose for the following reasons.

One reason I would change my nose is that I want to have a more comfortable life. My big nose makes me feel annoyed. For example, when I drink something, my big nose dunks in the liquid. That is really stressful to me. Also, I have to find the right pair of glasses because my face can seem ridiculous.

Another reason is that I want to have an attractive smile. Unfortunately, I have been single for a long time, so I need to have charming point that appeal to women. However, my nose is a major obstacle in my romance. When I smile it gets really wide, shaped like a mushroom and is very weird.

The main reason is that I want to recover my self-confidence. I always think negatively about my nose. My parents say it looks good on my face, but it is much too big in my opinion. Moreover, thanks to my ugly nose, my nickname was Elephant Trunk during my school days. It was a really stressful thing. Since my school days, I have had an inferiority complex about my nose. So I want to recover my self-confidence through plastic surgery.

I know that personality is much more important than appearance, but I think appearance is very important too these days. If I get the chance, I will change my ugly nose.

would you do me a favor? please correct my script.

If somebody asks me “What is one thing you want to change about yourself?”, I would change my big nose for the following reasons.

One reason I would change my nose is that I want to have a more comfortable life. My big nose makes me feel annoyed. For example, when I drink something, my big nose dunks in the liquid. That is really stressful to me. Also, I have to find the right pair of glasses because my face can seem ridiculous

Another reason is that I want to have an attractive smile. Unfortunately, I have been single for a long time, so I need to have charming point that appeals to women. However, my nose is a major obstacle in my romance. When I smile it gets really wide, shaped like a mushroom and is very weird.

The main reason is that I want to recover my self-confidence. I always think negatively about my nose. My parents say it looks good on my face, but it is much too big in my opinion. Moreover, Thanks to my ugly nose, my nickname was Elephant Trunk during my school days. It was a really stressful thing. Since my school days, I have had an inferiority complex about my nose. So I want to recover my self-confidence through plastic surgery.

I know that personality is much more important than appearance, but I think appearance is very important too these days. If I get the chance, I will change my ugly nose.

Good writing! I only found one minor mistake.

Your English is great! That is something you can be proud of :)