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That feeling...
Have you ever felt that a part of you is somewhere else in the world? I feel have felt like someone or something was waiting for me and was calling me with the thought. And the truth is I do not know how to explain it, because it's so complicated this feeling that there is no explanation, you know? I only know that in most of my dreams I'm there , crossing these landscapes and roads that I 've ever visited, being friends with people I've ever known . speaking another language and being completely happy with what I have .
This is really easy to understand. All of it sounds correct to my ear, very little is awkward.
feel -- Use only Past Tense or Present Tense for the sentance. Later you say "was"
it's so complicated... -- Be careful of "Run On" sentances. Split it into two sentances. "And the truth is I do not know how to explain it. The feeling is so complicated it lacks explanation, you know?"
ever -- "Ever" is not the same as "Never." Use "never" in both these spots.
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