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Can you modify it for me? Thank u!! 15th, Nov. The G20 Leaders Summit of twenty country was held in Turkey. However, the problem arose for two days, French suffered a shocking attack from terrorist. What made matters worse was that the blast and shooting contributed to 132 deaths and 300 injured people. Franscois Hollande, the French president claimed that French would never give way, beginning to fight back to IS, It was affected that beating terrorist became a hot topic in the Summit. Russian president Putin subscribed to his view that we were not supposed to have only the domestic interests in mind, but tried to work together, seeking common point while reserving difference, only in this way, can we solve the problem that is relevant to threating from terrorist, saving the countless refugee who lost their home.

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Can you modify it for me? Thank u!!

15th, Nov. The G20 Leaders Summit of twenty countries was held in Turkey. However, the problem arose for two days was that French France suffered a shocking attack from terrorists. What made matters worse was that the blast and shooting contributed to 132 deaths and 300 injured people. Franscois Hollande, the French president claimed that the French people would never give way, beginning and they would begin to fight back to ISIS. It was affected that beating How to beat terrorists became a hot topic in at the Summit. Russian president Putin subscribed to his view that we were not supposed to have only the domestic interests in mind, but we must tried try to work together, seeking common point while reserving differences. Only in this way, can we solve the problem that is relevant to dealing with with threats threating from terrorist, saving the countless refugees who lost their home.

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