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It is classified as a descriptive essay? It is classified as a descriptive essay? And correct my mistake please :) . . . One of the hardest experiences in my childhood was with my aunt. My aunt was nine and I was eight My grandmother had a farm with a lot of sheep and chickens.  In One day when we were in at my grandmother's farm, my aunt and I saw a small chick trying to hatch out of the its egg.  We felt pity for it because its mother was gone. My aunt said: "Let's take this chick homeand take care of it." I agreed to the idea and she took the chick. Then, she washed it.  After that, we brought to it water and some food.  We thought that it could eat by itself. After that, we went out to play and left it alone for two or three hours. After that, we went back to check it and we found it dead.  That was very hard on me. I cried a lot and felt sorry because of our foolish act.

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One of the hardest experiences in my childhood was with my aunt.

My aunt was nine and I was eight My grandmother had a farm with a lot of sheep and chickens. 
In One day when we were in at my grandmother's farm, my aunt and I saw a small chick trying to hatch out of the its egg. 

We felt pity for it because its mother was gone.
My aunt said: "Let's take this chick homeand take care of it."
I agreed to the idea and she took the chick. Then, she washed it. 
After that, we brought to it water and some food.
 We thought that it could eat by itself. After that, we went out to play and left it alone for two or three hours. After that, we went back to check it and we found it dead. 

That was very hard on me. I cried a lot and felt sorry because of our foolish act.

 

Yes, this is a narrative essay

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Sorry .. I mean It is classified as a narrative essay?

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