Adopt rather than buy!
This is about my dog's girlfriend BenBen's story.
She was adopted from breeding grounds,they are inhuman!!!
They cut her vocal cord off and compelled her to mating,they ground her teeth to flat avoid she to bite the cage, she was operate on her belly but they didn't give her a complete treat lead to her organs were connect up . At the end , they sent out dogs those none want buy or too old.
Although BenBen is very good now, but nobody buy these dogs ,these things would not happen.
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Adopt rather than buy!
This is about my dog's girlfriend, BenBen's, story.
She was adopted from breeding grounds, they are inhuman!!!
They cut her vocal cords and compelled her to mate, they ground her teeth flat to stop her from biting the cage, she was operated on her belly, but they didn't give her complete treatment. In the end, they sent out dogs those which no one wants buy or are too old.
Although BenBen is very good now, if nobody bought these dogs, these things would not happen.
Hello Wan Chin,
What a sad story, I am glad it has a happy ending for BenBen.
I made some corrections to make it better, but I could understand the story. I reworded one part (green) to give it more sense.
Hope this helps
Bob
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and about your writing, i didnt really understood what do you mean with :"they ground her teeth to flat " maybe u meant "file" her teeth to avoid her to bite the cage?
And also you forgot to write in past some verbs, as you were telling a story,
for example:operated,connected.
"Although BenBen is very good now, nobody "should" buy these dogs ,these things "should" not happen.
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omg! i cant believe what you r saying is for real :( it is such a sad story, i love animals and special dogs and i cant believe humans can be this cruel :(
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