When I first saw Minah, I got completely the wrong impression of her.

When I first saw Minah, I got completely the wrong impression of her. She seemed to me very strange because of her bright red hair, numerous tattoos of all over her body and weird clothes. Her appearance was odd for my surroundings and me. Of course all of us had a prejudice about her.
But some time later we got along and started to communicate. I realized that she was an amazing person. Minah had a brilliant mind and worked hard to achieve her goals. She liked animals and worked in a shelter at weekends. She took me to volunteer projects and fairs to show me how I could help people. Because of her I saw my life in a different way.
After university Minah has worked as an interpreter in international peace organizations. She is still helping the destitute and going to different events.
It does not matter what appearance you have, it is more important what person you are.

Hello Anna,

There is so much truth in your last sentence. 

Just a few small corrections

Bob