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Essay (need in checking) Music is everywhere. Today we can't imagine our life without it. Every second someone makes a new song or a melody and millions people hear it, they may enjoy it. The types of music have huge variety, all people have found their own lovely sounds. Music can help you to relax or make you laugh. We need music and it doesn't matter is that music traditional or international. It's more important only what you really like to listen to. It seems to me that music is an incredible thing! It is capable of cheering a person up or feeling sad. What's more, some songs or melodies are connected with any particular memories and that's why they are very important for us. There is such music which can cause tears because it's touched us very much. I think we all need in music. It's medicine. Music changes us. As the example when I was at the big concert of classical music in modern interpretation. And don't know how to say right, but I was impressed. Exactly music made me to experience such amazing emotions and feelings. Many people think what music, traditional or international, it more important for them. Well, tastes differ. But anyway I believe that every person should value the traditional music of his country. Music of any country expresses its identity and shows its own history. I am proud of music of my country. I'm proud of such singers as Vladimir Vysotsky or Victor Tcoi. Their songs are filled with the spirit of patriotism and love of country. In conclusion I'd like to add that music never disappear from our lives because It is not just around us, it's inside our soul. Music is very important in everyone's life. Therefore, it has so many styles and types which are now getting more and more.

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Music is everywhere. Today we can't imagine our life without it. Every second someone makes a new song or a melody and millions people hear it and they may enjoy it. The types of music have huge variety There is a huge variety in the types of music around the world and all people have found their own lovely sounds. Music can help you to relax or make you laugh. We need music and it doesn't matter is if that music is traditional or international. It's more important only what you really like to listen to.

It seems to me that music is an incredible thing! It is capable of cheering a person up or feeling make them feel sad. What's more, some songs or melodies are connected with any particular memories and that's why they are very important for to us. There is such music which can cause tears because it's touched us very much. I think we all need in music. It's medicine. Music changes us. As the example when I was at the a big concert of classical music in modern interpretation--and don't know how to say right--but I was impressed. Exactly music made me to experience such amazing emotions and feelings.

Many people think have an opinion on what music, traditional or international, is more important for them. Well, tastes differ. But anyway I believe that every person should value the traditional music of his country. Music of any country expresses its identity and shows its own history. I am proud of music of my country. I'm proud of such singers as Vladimir Vysotsky or Victor Tcoi. Their songs are filled with the spirit of patriotism and love of country.

In conclusion I'd like to add that music never disappears from our lives just because it is not just around us, it's inside our soul. Music is very important in everyone's life. Therefore, it has so many styles and types which are now getting more and more.

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