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PUBLIC TRANSPORT SYSTEM UNDER SCRUTINITY Introduction This report aims to examine closely the overall quality of the service provided by the public transport system of my area. Few people would dispute the fact that, even though there are some improvements to be made, it still has got some positive aspects. Positive features First of all, I am highly satisfied with the Smartphone application that allows me to know whether the bus is approaching my nearest bus stop or not. In terms of time management, it is very useful to being able to know precisely how long it will take for you to get on the bus. In addition, bus fares are quite reasonable. Possible improvements On the other hand, many people voice criticism of constant delays of our local buses. But I think that this situation might be highly improved if we change the payment system. Consequently, we could use cards and top them up instead of paying by cash. Apart from this, I am concerned about the short supply of buses which go straight to our university in the morning because I find it difficult to take them and, if I do take them, I breathe with difficulty inside due to their overcrowding conditions. Therefore, we could try to enlarge the tram rails and use this mean of transport in order to relieve the bus service´s high demand. Reasons for the improvements To sum up, the reasons why we should carry out the number of improvements stated above are logical and understandable. Firstly, the delays might be shortened by implementing a different payment procedure. Last but not least, regarding the shortage of buses and the existence of the tram, we could either increase the number of buses for university students in the morning, which is insufficient, or we could increase the tram rails.

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PUBLIC TRANSPORT SYSTEM UNDER SCRUTINITY

Introduction

This report will examine closely the overall quality of the service provided by the public transport system within my area. Few people would dispute the fact that, even though there are some improvements to be made, it has still got many positive aspects.

Positive features

First of all, I am highly satisfied with the Smartphone application that enables me to find out whether the bus is approaching my nearest bus stop or not. In terms of time management, it is very useful being able to know precisely how long it will be before you are able to get on a bus. In addition, bus fares are quite reasonable in the area.

Possible improvements

On the other hand, many people have voiced their criticism regarding the constant delays of our local buses. But I think that this situation could be improved greatly if we changed the payment system. For example, top-up cards instead of paying by cash. Apart from this, I am concerned about the minimal amount of buses going straight to our university in the morning. I find it difficult to take them and, if I do take them, I have difficulty breathing once I'm on board because they are so overcrowded. Therefore, we should try to extend the tram network and use that means of transport to relieve the high demand currently placed upon our bus service.

Reasons for the improvements

To sum up, the reasons why we should carry out the number of improvements stated above are logical and understandable. Firstly, the delays could be shortened by implementing a different payment system. Secondly, regarding the shortage of buses and the existence of the tram, we should either increase the number of buses for university students in the morning, which is currently insufficient, or we could extend the tram network.

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