Brake system

Have you ever heard about braking systems? In simple terms it is a system which stops cars, bicycles and another same vehicles. Think of your bicycle. Do you remember what it is made of? Does it come into your head what it looks like? Yeah, It consists of 2 pads and a handle which connects with a steel cable. Ok, What do I want to say? In performance cars the brake system works the same. If you don't believe me you could ask around or turn to the internet. The brake system of cars consists of a pedal, pads, discs and complex equipment where the main processes occur. Brake discs are often made out of ceramics. Pads are made from asbestos-based materials

Hello Aydar,

This is all understandable and it makes sense but there are a lot of small mistakes. The biggest problem seems to occur with articles especiall 'the'. If you are taling about something specific then you use 'the'. In the last 2 sentences you have used the passive tense, you make this by using the correct form of the verb 'be' and the past participle.

Hope this helps

Bob