Smoke, I?
Yesterday was very funny at the work. It was 8 o clock and I was very happy.The reason: I slept very well and I had a nice dream. My collegue asked me: Sandra, what did you smoke? "You looks so happy, so relax, in good mood. I was wondering because I thought I looks always happy. But perhaps i had a wrong impresion of myself. Right now I know why am I so happy; I dont expect anything from the others. By this way I dont expect anymore sad, when the things dont happen as i like. Today was a great day: i got a big project. I had visit from one good friend. I did a lot of things for myself. Thanks a lot for the correction. I dont have a lot of time: only one year for the improvement my english, i need your help to realize my dream. Good night, sleep well:)
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Smoke, Me?
Something very funny happened at work yesterday. It was 8 o'clock and I was very happy. The reason: I slept very well and I had a nice dream. My collegue asked me, "Sandra, what did you smoke?" You looks so happy, so relaxed, in a good mood. I was wondering because I thought I always looked happy. But perhaps I had the wrong impresion of myself. Right now I know why am I so happy; I don't expect anything from the others. In this way, I'm not disappointed when the things don't happen as I like. Today was a great day: I got a big project. I was visited by a good friend. I did a lot of things for myself. Thanks a lot for the correction. I don't have a lot of time: only one year for to improve my English. I need your help to realize my dream. Good night, sleep well:)
Remember to capitalize the word "I" and to put an apostrophe in "don't". Overall pretty good! :)
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When someone is a good mood in my country, Iran we say to him/her what have you eaten? and we surely he/is drunken!! of course just for kidding
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